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Old 10-29-2016, 04:35 PM   #1 (permalink)
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I haven't finished something in a while, feels nice. You don't gotta read it or analyze it or anything, no big deal, but if you should read, I would really love any opinions. No big deal, though. Just something else from me to inevitably swept under the couch and forgotten. I'm not one of the cool people.

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Hmm, what's this in my pocket?

*epic guitar solo blasts into my face*

DAMN IT MONDO

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Old 10-30-2016, 05:12 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Anyone read
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Old 10-30-2016, 05:23 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 10-30-2016, 05:33 PM   #4 (permalink)
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I'll take that as a no
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Old 10-31-2016, 01:52 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Wow! Mondo, that's surprisingly good.
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Old 10-31-2016, 11:23 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Why is it surprising
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Old 10-31-2016, 11:26 AM   #7 (permalink)
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I didn't know people used Google Docs.
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Why is it surprising
I was expecting something that was decent, needed improvement. But I have no real bitches on it. The ending was somewhat surprising, it ties everything together quite nicely, it took me by surprise.

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I pretty much exclusively use google docs.
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Me too. I also don't have my own computer to save anything

I felt like I rushed the ending kinda. I wanted to be more horror originally but gave up after the door part because I guess that's not really my strongsuit
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Me too. I also don't have my own computer to save anything

I felt like I rushed the ending kinda. I wanted to be more horror originally but gave up after the door part because I guess that's not really my strongsuit
Google docs is nice, cause as long as you have a wi-fi you can work on it from any device.
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