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Old 03-26-2017, 11:58 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Post New lyrics to "Supermarket Flowers" by Ed Sheeran

Hi everyone! I'm 16 yo girl from Czech republic. I'm new here and I'm really glad this site does exist. This thursday I'm gonna play the piano song Supermarket Flowers, originally performed by Ed Sheeran. It used to be a surprise for my piano teacher. I'm going to sing to it. But the lyrics is... the lyrics is wonderful, but it's too sad for me. Actually, Not for me, but for the situation. I tried to write a new lyrics where I will say how much does my teacher mean to me, but I failed It's harder than I though.

My teacher, Lenka, has been there for me everytime I needed her. She's literally more as my mum as my teacher. I've known her since my childhood and I love her so much. She's at the age of my mum, about 43. By that song, I want to tell her how important is she to me.

I wrote few lines of the new lyrics... but it's not good. Can you please, help me?

Here's the lyrics:

Verse 1:
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-- (those first two lines are missing, can you please help me)
How many moments we have spent side by side?
Creating memories of our lives.

(there used to be second verse, but I cancelled it , because it was too long)

Pre-chorus:
Oh I'm in pieces it's tearing me up but I know
A live with you is a live that is worth.

Chorus:
So I'll sing hallelujah,
you are an angel in the shape of my mum
when I fell down you'd be there holding me up
spread your wings as you go
when you came to me I said hallelujah
I'm home.

Verse 2:
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-- (same situation as in the first verse - can you please help me?)
You always todl me don't you cry when you're down
But there's a tear everytime that I blink.

Pre-chorus:
And I hope that I'll see the world as you do 'cause I know
A life with love is a life that's been lived.

Chorus:
So I'll sing hallelujah,
you are an angel in the shape of my mum,
you got to see the person I have become,
spread your wings as you go,
when I saw you there I said hallelujah,
that's my home.

I'm really lost with those 4 lines. Can you, please, help me? <3

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Old 03-26-2017, 01:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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I suggest that you do not do this in front of a group of psychopaths/children.
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