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Old 08-08-2005, 04:09 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Again, Feedback greatly appreciated.

It’s automatic, rhythmatic, and superstatic
It’s what makes you get off of your feet with no beat
It’s the rhythm it’s the groove that makes you want to move
It’s the boogie its how to be now listen and you’ll see
The music takes you back, feeling a surprise attack
Dealing it hard, keeping strong, and bringing it raw
Busting through keeping true come on, and listen to
Me, pump the beat, look, your bouncing in you seat

Now you wonder why I’m singing the swinging, nice and cool
And yet you’re listen to me rhyming and you know that I rule
Cause its coming back to get you double trouble take a stand
It’s me yea believe that I’m a different brand

Now I flow how I like and I like how I flow
You’re hearing me from Canada down to Puerto Rico
They’re like, “Hey, Que tal, hombre caliente.”
“I’d just like to know how you doing, eh?”
Wild freestyle, driving straight through the 8th mile
Hitting it up, then going right down to the pile
Picking up the mic, then dropping it like its hooooooot
Original rhymes, you know that’s its nooot
The usual unusual delusional and critical critic
All the clinical cynics that are still in it
For all those out there searching for a voice or a band
Look no further, because you’ve found a different brand

Now you wonder why I’m singing the swinging, nice and cool
And yet you’re listen to me rhyming and you know that I rule
Cause its coming back to get you double trouble take a stand
It’s me yea believe that I’m a different brand

So stop. Hip hop. Take a step, step aside, get ready for the ride of your life
It’s the time of your life, the greatest thing you will hear, and listen….. ‘cause it’s near
It’s everything you wanted it’s everything you had
What you thought was gone was right next to you and it aint half bad
You’ve found your soul, your musical originality
Steppin’ to your own world, shot from reality
It’s a travesty once you realize how good you can be
Even better than the best of the best, your majesty
You’re finding out it aint so bad being new and not bland
Once you’ve found your very own different brand

Now you wonder why I’m singing the swinging, nice and cool
And yet you’re listen to me rhyming and you know that I rule
Cause its coming back to get you double trouble take a stand
It’s me yea believe that I’m different,

Now you wonder why I’m singing the swinging, nice and cool
And yet you’re listen to me rhyming and you know that I rule
Cause its coming back to get you double trouble take a stand
It’s me yea believe that I’m a different brand


Hopefully better than the last,
Skuroccer9

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Old 08-08-2005, 06:36 PM   #2 (permalink)
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is that a rap?

cause it reads like a rap.

and i'm not "qualified to critique raps"
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Old 08-08-2005, 07:05 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Well, it's kina like a rap, but if you've ever heard jason mraz then u'll no what type it is. It's like... rapping lyrics to a guitar? Also like what the Chili
Peppers do.
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Old 08-08-2005, 07:36 PM   #4 (permalink)
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nope don't listen to Mraz. and don't like the peppers.

my friend, that it wasn't meant to be
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Old 08-08-2005, 09:53 PM   #5 (permalink)
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Okay genres aside, place it as backstreet boys singing, i dont give a damn. What do u guys think about THE LYRICS/RHYMEZZZ????
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Old 08-09-2005, 08:37 PM   #6 (permalink)
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its got the arrogant bravado of rap. and im not feeling that.
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Old 08-09-2005, 08:51 PM   #7 (permalink)
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sorry, but anysong that has "rule" in it, and is not by yngwie malmstein is not good.
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Old 08-09-2005, 11:27 PM   #8 (permalink)
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sorry, but anysong that has "rule" in it, and is not by yngwie malmstein is not good.
haha tru dat.
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Old 08-10-2005, 08:18 PM   #9 (permalink)
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its too "look how ****ing awesome I am." Your songs seem to focus on you alot. try, if only for the reading public, writing about an event, and make it one that didn't paticipate in.
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Old 08-17-2005, 07:15 PM   #10 (permalink)
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that sounds a lot like jason mraz
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