Best friends forever (heavy metal)
 

Hi, I'd like some feedback regarding lyrics, and by that I mean have you felt any emotion while reading?

Walking 3x
Step by step
Walking

Every step
Just an echo
Every laugh
Just a lie
Turning back
Nothing to see
Ooooh it's a lonely road

Emerging from darkness
Not devil from hell
Not demons from abyss
Just apparitions of friends 2x
Friends I used to know 2x

Every step
Collapsing in it's beggining
Every laugh
Cracking silence
Embracing fog
Nothing to feel
Oooooh it's a lonely road

Emerging from darkness
Not devil from hell
Not demons from abyss
Just apparitions of friends 2x
Friends I used to know 2x

Feeling metal in my back
And it hurts like hell
Devil, demons or a friend
What difference does it make
When they all kill you while you're awake

Grindcore?

Not quite. When I think about it, I believe slower, softer vocals and instrumentals would be more evocative and would suit better.
You think lyrics would be better for grindcore? Not a fan to be honest of thar genre.

Are you a pirate?

What sense does that question even have lol

Tbh if your title can be turned into "BFFs" then maybe you should change it.

The "thar" made me think that.

Oh that lol
Yes you got me there mate, I am one-eyed somalian pirat with parrot on a shoulder

And yes, bff seems like a better name. It is certainly not something you'd expect when you hear the name of song lol