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Old 10-23-2017, 08:37 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hi, I'd like some feedback regarding lyrics, and by that I mean have you felt any emotion while reading?

Walking 3x
Step by step
Walking

Every step
Just an echo
Every laugh
Just a lie
Turning back
Nothing to see
Ooooh it's a lonely road

Emerging from darkness
Not devil from hell
Not demons from abyss
Just apparitions of friends 2x
Friends I used to know 2x

Every step
Collapsing in it's beggining
Every laugh
Cracking silence
Embracing fog
Nothing to feel
Oooooh it's a lonely road

Emerging from darkness
Not devil from hell
Not demons from abyss
Just apparitions of friends 2x
Friends I used to know 2x

Feeling metal in my back
And it hurts like hell
Devil, demons or a friend
What difference does it make
When they all kill you while you're awake
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Old 10-23-2017, 09:03 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Grindcore?
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Old 10-24-2017, 11:07 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Grindcore?
Not quite. When I think about it, I believe slower, softer vocals and instrumentals would be more evocative and would suit better.
You think lyrics would be better for grindcore? Not a fan to be honest of thar genre.
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Old 10-24-2017, 12:22 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Are you a pirate?
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Old 10-25-2017, 09:20 AM   #5 (permalink)
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What sense does that question even have lol
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Old 10-25-2017, 09:26 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Tbh if your title can be turned into "BFFs" then maybe you should change it.
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Old 10-25-2017, 01:16 PM   #7 (permalink)
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What sense does that question even have lol
The "thar" made me think that.
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Old 10-29-2017, 07:37 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Oh that lol
Yes you got me there mate, I am one-eyed somalian pirat with parrot on a shoulder

And yes, bff seems like a better name. It is certainly not something you'd expect when you hear the name of song lol
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