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Old 05-10-2018, 11:07 AM   #101 (permalink)
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Old 05-11-2018, 02:29 PM   #102 (permalink)
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In the Immortal words of the first ever Youtube commenter, "first."

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Old 05-11-2018, 02:46 PM   #103 (permalink)
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I wish it was longer and slower, doesn't create much of an atmosphere this way, but not bad actually.

I gotta speed things up.
I got the lyrics and the basic chords. Tried playing a jazzy bass line yesterday and failed miserably. Haven't really played bass for 5-6 years though.
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Old 05-11-2018, 03:15 PM   #104 (permalink)
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yeah, not bad blank. like grindy said, longer would’ve been better. sounded kinda eerie so i think you were onto something just needed to give it a little more time to develop. either way it’s good.

will be listening to whatever is posted in this thread even tho i can’t play an instrument so feel free to ignore my feedback as my musical abilities are about as prominent as Frownland’s.
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Old 05-11-2018, 03:19 PM   #105 (permalink)
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Old 05-11-2018, 03:29 PM   #106 (permalink)
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I wish it was longer and slower, doesn't create much of an atmosphere this way, but not bad actually.
I felt it had a nice dream like quality. It was originally three minutes but it just dragged on too long I felt.

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Scale?

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yeah, not bad blank. like grindy said, longer would’ve been better. sounded kinda eerie so i think you were onto something just needed to give it a little more time to develop. either way it’s good.
Eerie? I didn't get an Eerie quality.
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Scale?
No settled yet.
Plus I'm not much of a scale guy (since I suck).
Mostly play around until it sounds good to me.
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Old 05-11-2018, 04:00 PM   #108 (permalink)
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Old 05-11-2018, 04:04 PM   #109 (permalink)
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Old 05-11-2018, 04:16 PM   #110 (permalink)
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This is great but i agree it should be longer. You mentioned you shortened it but i think you found a nice lingering melody you should prolong.
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