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Old 09-14-2018, 10:43 PM   #1 (permalink)
Ace
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Join Date: Jul 2006
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Question Believe

Good evening!

Thought I would pop in to link my latest track and get some feedback from you guys. It's admittedly not the best in the world, but I'm proud of it for the most part, considering the difficulty in working with folks across the seas.

This is not completely my style, but the girl I'm working with fits these guitar parts so well, I feel like it would be a shame not to write the music in my head.

So, a weird thing happened after the master, which kind of leads me to dislike something in the very beginning of the song....but, I won't point it out, I'll let you be the judge. Let me know what you think - still learning every day .

https://youtu.be/bqg6rBiRHAY
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LYRICS

Life and loss
Fear and the shame
In my heart - the fault
Is mine just the same
Though I know it's wrong
I've shouldered the blame

I'd give my life up for you, oh
But there's nothing I could do, no
I believe, one day I'll find
The reason you are gone

I know
I hope

All this time
I've held on to yesterday
What we've shared
Can never be taken away from me
One more night
Won't change how I feel today

I'd bleed my heart out for you, oh
There's nothing I wouldn't do, no
I believe, one day I'll find
A way to carry on

I know
I hope
At least I'll try

Hold me
Give me strength to replace this
Somehow pick up the pieces
Of everything
All the parts we're made of
Scattered out like stars within a sky
Of many shades of us

Tell me
Show me
What it's like to believe when
Faith is broken
Give me your clarity
Heal my eyes so I can see
Your face
Show me how to breathe again

All the pain I'm feeling
All the things I'm missing
Lost myself along the way
Now I've struggled to find meaning

But you've shown me
Helped me
Taught me
All I know

Ohhh....

Tell me
Which way to go

Light and love
Will both remain
In my soul - the hope
Is always the same
I believe, and I will fight

Even though I know you're gone

I can't let you go
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