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Old 06-04-2020, 03:31 AM   #1 (permalink)
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So i am very new to writing music but i need help to get the rest of the song started. sorry for bad english it is not my first language..

This is what i got this far:
Martini Blue
I am swimming in the waves of you
Mmm, baby you’re my blue
Martini Blue
Don't let me break up in the sea of you
Wrap me up more
My baby (ooohh ohhhh ooooohhh)
My lady (ooohh ohhhh ooooohhh)
My baby (ooohh ohhhh ooooohhh)
My lady (ooohh ohhhh ooooohhh)
Martini Blue
You got me moving on that Martini Blue, yeah
Everything you do, yeah
makes me want to keep Coming To You LIVE


Just look at your eyes
Girl, you wanna mmmm
Then I will nod
Cause you mmmm
Girl whats your flavor , mmmm
Turn off the phone, I don’t want that brrrr, yeah
20/20 focused on you baby
Vanilla ice cream above cherry
Pastel colored lake above ferry
Blue ocean above town Venice
I'm blue you berry, that's the chemistry of the two of us (yeah, yeah)
Faisons l’amour, Paris (yeah, yeah, yeah)
So in love with the way you move
I’m so into you, into you
You got me, I got you
Our love’s deep like the blue
Into you, into you
You got me, I got you
You’re my Martini Blue


Martini Blue
You're swimming in the waves of you
Mmm, baby you’re my blue
Martini Blue
Don't let me break up in the sea of you
Wrap me up more
My baby (ooohh ohhhh ooooohhh)
My lady (ooohh ohhhh ooooohhh)
My baby (ooohh ohhhh ooooohhh)
My lady (ooohh ohhhh ooooohhh)
Martini Blue
You got me moving on that Martini Blue, yeah
Everything you do, yeah
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Old 06-04-2020, 03:45 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Oh my god this is even better than Chard's stuff
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Old 06-04-2020, 04:12 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Omg thank you so much
but i am not that good yet
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Old 06-05-2020, 09:40 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Question I have finally finished one text

By the way i am thinking a slow beat to this one:

It's my dedication
It's my dedication
It's my dedication
It's my dedication

I been waiting for something
Something like an answer in my life
No matter how hard you try
My sterile spirit keeps thirsty
Endless satiety I hope for it
A tired mother in life, no
My reflection in the window, no
This is the moment I see on the screen
The moment I waited for, for a long, long time
You changed everything with the blue youth
All of my past dreams and memories


I hope that God can really use me
Of all the talents of his choosing
He signed me up for this music
And I hope that I can really use it
For the kingdom
For the glory
Funny sound to anyone
It might be, I don't care


Even if I'm alone in the room
I remember not alone
Even without my side around me
I remember not alone
Yeah I'm surfin' with my Christ
Christ on the wave, Christ on the wave
Surfin' with my Christ
Christ on the wave, Christ on the wave

I'm not pulling rice these days
I don't take care of my body
I don't have a lot of intention to meet many other artists
But I'm pretty happy that music eventually became my life
When I was young, my parents never opposed me
Yeah, you know what I'm sayin'? like
I don't understand my parents
Different generation, different eye level
I was strong, my great greed
I'm not working hard anymore
In front of my troubled worries
It became the hand you gave me out
So much help

Even if I'm alone in the room
I remember not alone
Even without my side around me
I remember not alone
Yeah I'm surfin' with my Christ
Christ on the wave, Christ on the wave
Surfin' with my Christ
Christ on the wave, Christ on the wave

Okay, now I have to look forward and go
I have to change my figure slowly
Father this is my devotion
Based on faith in you and not emotion


Even if I'm alone in the room
I remember not alone
Even without my side around me
I remember not alone
Yeah I'm surfin' with my Christ
Christ on the wave, Christ on the wave
Surfin' with my Christ
Christ on the wave, Christ on the wave

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Keep it all in one thread, please. Thanks.
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Old 08-13-2020, 08:45 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Lol, I forgot about this. The first one is a ****ing masterpiece.
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I sent that first lyric to a friend and he refers to me as Lady Martini Blue now lol
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Maybe I should record this ****.
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Omg yes do it
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