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<<<>>> 08-23-2005 06:01 PM

Is my song any good?
 
here it goes:
intro
verse
chorus
bridge
verse
verse
chorus
chorus
outro

TheBig3 08-25-2005 07:27 AM

Alright well run it by me. The bridge is what again. I use my own terms and I got tripped up with Bridge and Coda when I was learning my musical jargon, Never really got a definite idea of it. But if its what I think it is, then it should come later in the song. Maybe like:
intro
verse
chorus
verse
verse
bridge
verse
chorus
chorus
outro

and I would scrap an outro. That sounds too Limp Bizkit for me.

<<<>>> 08-25-2005 10:42 AM

too limp bizkit? F*** Fred Durst! But anyway. Why would you purposely follow the traditional song structure? I never got that. Be creative.

<<<>>> 08-25-2005 10:43 AM

nothing wrong with outros unless you do it Durst style

<<<>>> 08-25-2005 10:43 AM

the post was originally a stupid joke

TheBig3 08-25-2005 09:03 PM

Yeah but it wasn't funny so I tried to salvage it.

EDGE 08-26-2005 12:50 AM

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<<<>>> 08-26-2005 10:58 AM

Quote:

Yeah but it wasn't funny
thats why i said stupid joke, see exhibit A
Quote:

Exhibit A:the post was originally a stupid joke

tdoc210 08-26-2005 02:53 PM

poor children bickering

EDGE 08-26-2005 02:54 PM

Oh..



'hahahah'.


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