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Old 08-23-2005, 06:01 PM   #1 (permalink)
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here it goes:
intro
verse
chorus
bridge
verse
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chorus
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Old 08-25-2005, 07:27 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Alright well run it by me. The bridge is what again. I use my own terms and I got tripped up with Bridge and Coda when I was learning my musical jargon, Never really got a definite idea of it. But if its what I think it is, then it should come later in the song. Maybe like:
intro
verse
chorus
verse
verse
bridge
verse
chorus
chorus
outro

and I would scrap an outro. That sounds too Limp Bizkit for me.
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Old 08-25-2005, 10:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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too limp bizkit? F*** Fred Durst! But anyway. Why would you purposely follow the traditional song structure? I never got that. Be creative.
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nothing wrong with outros unless you do it Durst style
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the post was originally a stupid joke
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Yeah but it wasn't funny so I tried to salvage it.
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Old 08-26-2005, 12:50 AM   #7 (permalink)
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thats why i said stupid joke, see exhibit A
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Old 08-26-2005, 02:53 PM   #9 (permalink)
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poor children bickering
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Oh..



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