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Old 12-15-2020, 10:48 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Snake: Tales from the Spirit-Dude

Hello Music Banter how's it going? Anyways, I like writing songs, though I'm bad at composing lyrics, so I figured I should post some here. I try to write often, but I normally create a couple of lines at a time, when inspiration hits me. Then I go back and edit those lines, or combine them with other lines. I don't know how to format this tread so that my posts stand out from comments, so I am probably doing this wrong, but it's whatever. I am open to taking criticism, so feel free to speak your mind about my crapola.
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Last edited by SnakeSpiritDude; 12-17-2020 at 12:33 PM. Reason: Deleted it cause of how bad it was
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Old 12-16-2020, 12:29 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Default "Untitled 2"

Back at it again with another trash stanza. This time, with chords. I kinda like this one, I will keep on working on it.

"Untitled 2"

bm Am bm
I watched the rain come down last night
Am bm
I saw that smile leave your face

You couldn't stand to be alone
G Cm
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