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Old 03-10-2021, 11:27 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Hello everyone i am 115 and I very new to music and am going to post my potential songs here to see what people think, other are free to do it as well

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Old 03-10-2021, 11:29 AM   #2 (permalink)
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Old 03-10-2021, 11:29 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Yeah, yeah, yeah, yeah, uh

Chillin in Cali LAX, my friends keep in touch with me every day
"The fortress is listening," without knowing exactly what I'm doing
It's awkward for no reason
Uh, yeah, roughly, I'm doing everything, 365 days
I'm busy but honestly, the more bothersome
That's why it's rough and hang up, I got nuthin' to say
I have nothing to see with you guys who can't even see my blueprint design
I don't check, toast with the brothers who believed and followed
The teacher who was pointing his finger also said that he was proud and told him to come.
You said you looked at me like a bug, okay
Now I understand what I became
All credits rightfully deserved
Including you, an atheist who didn't believe me, you heard?

Yeah, I got here, I came up with all my hard work, yeah, I'm flexing
Mother****ers doubt me they talk ****, where dare you not see
See like me see what I see, blueprint, yeah, I got this (I got this)
I got this (I got this), Pasadena, 11 in morning

Yeah, yeah, and it goes like this
On and on and on and on
Yeah, yeah, and it goes like this
On and on and on and on
Yeah, yeah, and it goes like this
On and on and on and on
Yeah, yeah, and it goes like this
On and on and on and on

Am I right or am I right, I didn't lie
Furthermore, I don’t just build a plan, I move on to action,
Brought it to reality, it's not a fool box
Stare thru the screen like It's not enuff
The unreality you're seeing, I'm not anymore
I'm living in that moment
You hold the keyboard, and evaluate it with some kind of standard
Because of you I elevate
The third eye, I levitate
Thank you, thanks to you, I learned a lot, I grew up
Call me Sponge Bob, I got this already
It took 10 years, 10 months to self-study, blame for the improved era
But I just laugh (Ha, ha)
Their footsteps and forward-looking encounters
115 now I'm in the limelight
Light, light, limelight
115 now I'm in the limelight

Yeah, I got here, I came up with all my hard work, yeah, I'm flexing
Mother****ers doubt me they talk ****, where dare you not see
See like me see what I see, blueprint, yeah, I got this (I got this)
I got this (I got this), Pasadena, 11 in morning

Yeah, yeah, and it goes like this
On and on and on and on
Yeah, yeah, and it goes like this
On and on and on and on
Yeah, yeah, and it goes like this
On and on and on and on
Yeah, yeah, and it goes like this
On and on and on and on
[Outro]
11 in morning, 11 in morning
11 in morning, yeah, yeah
What ever*you do, I see you
The whole familiy crew too
And shout-out to my mans
And of course my mother
Uh, huh
11 in morning
11 in morning
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