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Old 03-22-2021, 02:57 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is a song I wrote called Weatherhead, feedback appreciated

I went to breathe it all in
I went to stop and start again
I went to go my on and on

Lost in twisting visions of your amphetamines
And what could anything mean
At all

(Chorus chords)

I'm scared of what you do not say
And god I gave you the okay
So lace your shoes and walk away

And god you laced my shoes in some sort of sailors knot
Am I some sort of afterthought
To you?

Is there a star
Is there a star beneath your stairs?
Your stairs?
Is there a star
Is there a star beneath your stairs?
Your stairs?

My eyes are somewhere underground
The box spring on the merry-go-round
In all I've heard in all I've found

My eyes are somewhere in the lake
It's psychosomatic and its opaque
Shivering static in sepia waves

So I'm losing sinking ships on personalities
Guage your control of me
While you're there

And carbon feeling flames all washing over me
Can't tear two eyes to see
Me there

I fell
Please be honest
Please be honest
And I fell

Don't hide
Please be honest
Please be honest
Please don't hide

I know
It's for catharsis
And please be honest
and I know

I don't mind
Please be honest
If you're honest
I don't mind

"Mom and dad I guess I couldn't please us both
You know you mean the most
To me"

"Mom and dad I guess I couldn't please us both
You know you mean the most
To me"

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Old 03-22-2021, 03:10 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Moving. When the lyrics went 'chorus chords' I really felt that
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Old 03-24-2021, 01:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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It's not art
Meaning and moving
is not what I'm doing

It's just proof
proof of a promise
to myself

I'm sinking, I sink beneath the floorboards every time
And if i fall beneath the weight, well I just hope I spread out nice
It brings me peace, breaks me in pieces
It brings me peace, breaks me in pieces
I miss it, can't say I ever had a reason why
It's just a smile for myself, It's just a smile for the outside
Brings me peace, cuts me in pieces
It brings me peace, cuts me in pieces

It's hard, every day
I just wanna show you
I want you to see

It hurts, I hate what I do
I don't wanna feel it
Anymore

I'm weak, I hate it when you say
"Are you sure?"
I miss it every day

And it hurts, I hate what I do
I don't wanna feel it
I don't wanna feel it

I need his ambition
I'll have to tell myself again
"Man all the pretty things,
The pretty things won't be your friends."

I think I could've wished
And put a tracker in the bear
Man I ran for 184 days and it led me there.

And all of my old friends
Still at the bottom of the lake
Well are you waiting for? What are you waiting for?

It's hard being two ears
With zero problems of my own
Man I'm a passenger in spirit
on all the planes that you have flown

It's hard being afraid
of turning at the sign
Well man it's hard to feel conveyed
When its just hard to find the time
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Old 03-25-2021, 09:28 PM   #4 (permalink)
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60bpm
And I found it on my own
Well let's comfort me, I do I don't wanna be alone

And I hook my voice up to the box
Well ink from my fingers covers keys it fastens locks

If I cant heal
I won't reshape
Electric eels
May take my place

And so what if I
Don't ever bloom
There's no memory
Inside the womb

And you take these snapshots in your memory
but will you even remember me
I'm just right out of frame

And now that I've plucked you from the ground
Well I watch the white fuzz fall around me
As I blow your head away

I wanna wake up with no memory
I'd hit my head and all my life would go away

And I don't wanna have a say in things
So just pull the trigger It'll give me time to think

And so what if I
Don't ever learn
Well not to call
Just to confirm

And my hands are tied
Up by your promise
So you decide
Well if I saw it

55bpm
In a soft
My soft silly, snowy town
I lost at my center of things

In a soft
My soft silly, snowy town
I lost at my center of things

50bpm
Well If I'm a worm
On the sidewalk
Then rain is good
I'll wash the sun off
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