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Old 06-01-2026, 02:51 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by Ruby Slipper View Post
Having read the lyrics above, they seem kind of pedestrian to me. That's not to say those kinds of feelings don't deserve to be expressed. I'd certainly agree they do. If you're of an artistic nature and someone has hurt you badly, it seems only natural to want to put your feelings in writing and work them out that way. ...However, the person who wrote those lyrics didn't do it in what I'd consider a very artful or thought provoking way. I expect a little more from my music and song lyrics - imagery, symbolism, a moving or meaningful turn of phrase. I don't get any of that from the lyrics above. Therefore: pedestrian. He could have worked a whole lot harder on those lyrics and come up with something better, but I'd guess that's not this lyric writer's forte and most of the other songs this person writes are pedestrian, too.
My Protagonist wrote this song the day he found out his Musician tried to sell him out for $5,000. He was hurting REALLY bad when he wrote this song. He ended up forgiving his Musician after the Musician apologized and asked him for forgiveness and agreed to NEVER do a dastardly stunt like this again. He ripped up the lyrics and rewrote them word for word when one of his other Musicians had sex with another Musician's girlfriend.
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