told me what exactly? Soooo lost.

that you should dump me, dude!

wow this thread just got hardcore.

this is much more intersting.

by the way i would change 'Hellbound life' with Hellbound ride. Just sounds better.

NOOOOO NEVER!!!!!

Yes, and if I did get into a relationship, I didn't want the closet to scare me from being affectionate

Chain Me Down
 

I wrote this one about darkcornerinthecloset. I got to use one of my favorite metaphors in this one.
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Explain this feeling I get inside
‘cause I was told love involved butterflies.
I’m down on my knees begging you please
to feel the same about me.
This stabbing pain fills my heart when I hide how I feel today
And I can’t even find the words to say.

[chorus] If I can’t have your love
Chain me down to the ocean floor
So I can drown and hurt no more.

You’re more beautiful than a starlit sky
At twenty past midnight.
For once I wanna fall in love
And land gently on my feet
‘cause every other time I’ve landed
Face-down in concrete.

[chorus] x2

I hide these three words I long to say
And even if you walk away
I guess I’ll love you anyway [x3]

[chorus]
Hide these three words I long to say
[chorus]
I still love you anyway.

I like the imagery and flow. There weren't any parts that seemed out of place to me.

I love the chorus, by the way. It's a very nice metaphor (I think it would be considered a metaphor).

If you use it in a song, I'd like to hear it.

By the way my favorite metaphor is the "I wanna fall in love and land gently on my feet..."

I bought a hallmark card that said that once.

My favorite metaphor is grape juice.