stuck
 

Okay sooo... I've written 5 songs for my up and coming band & I seriously can't edit to save my life! The titles are: Not the One, Rainbows at Midnight, Serenity, Saw You in a Dream, and When it all Ends. If any sound interesting, tell me which one you'd like to help with and I'll post the lyrics for you. I really need help, I've been trying to kick off this band for 8 years now so any help is appreciated.

You could start by changing your username to something less... less.

Rainbows at Midnight sounds mildy interesting. Let's see.

Rainbows at Midnight
The clock says twelve A.M and I'm at my window again
challenging the velvet sky
laying back down so hard I try
to get some sleep in tonight

[chorus]
I can't sleep
'cause I keep thinking
why can't I start dreaming
my mind is running 'round
and it's cold outside
and I can't calm down
my imagination is creating
rainbows at midnight

returning to the sill
I guess I have some time to kill
[I know I need something else here but I don't know what to do]

[chorus]

if I could sleep
maybe I could keep
my sanity
as I lay in bed tonight
I toss and turn hoping that I might
close my eyes

[chorus]
I can't sleep 'cause I keep thinking
why can't I start dreaming about
the things I want to find
how do I ease my mind.




I don't wanna change my user name, that's just who I am

Deep and Depressing
 

I am a blackened soul,
I have been stained,
all has been lost and nothing gained

I am an outcast
yet to be found
I stand still while the world goes 'round

Thoughts of suicide visit every day
but somehow I manage to push them away

I would express these feelings to people I know
but these thoughts they are my own
a work of art
deep and depressing
I don't understand why people
keep messing
with my emotions

I try so hard not to be outspoken
but alas the silence is broken
who I am and how I feel
these words are coaxed
out of me

the pain experienced when I
express
makes my life a total
mess

I wish people would understand
I wish they didn't care
though I'm used to the snickering
and the stares
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I wrote this at a New Year's Eve party (some new year huh?) this is what I do when I'm depressed. What do you think? I always look for feedback on my depression. ;P

Jeeze. Who peed in your cheerios?

idk - I'm bi & most of my family is too religious to accept my sexuality, I kissed my best friend & now she hates me, I have done a lot of **** just to make myself feel remotely liked by other people, & my dad makes me feel like a total failure at everything, plus i'm in love with someone i'll probably never have a chance with- I guess everyone

>.> That sounds like my family.

Except it has nothing to do with religion.

They just want me to be straight and I don't have a sexuality.

You just have to be yourself.

I'm sorry you feel so lost.

People are always going to mess with you.

It's the way they are.

I don't really know why.

so u kissed a girl and you liked it lol?

Comparing through experience, girls are better kissers than guys anyway.

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no it was akward as hell she didn't kiss me back