^Posts like these are Why no matter what he says everyone will always love CC.

ok... I may be deep and depressing but you just took it to a whole new level of deep! seriously when I wrote that all I was thinking was "OMG I'm so f***ing tired!"

idk if I agree with that, I don't exactly love him right now.

Yes you do. You will realize it soon or later.

A slightly less depressing poem?
 

I haven't come up with a title for this yet but I think it's slightly more hopeful and less depressing than my other work.

I believe there
is a girl that
lives halfway
across the world
she feels my pain
thinks she's going
insane
I intend to
meet her one
day and when I
do I will say

You are my life's ambition
and I've been waiting for you to
save me from myself come on
there's no admission
we're both on our way to hell

She's shy and self-conscious
not ready to come out
but I'll sit her down and say
we've got a lot to talk about

I won't give up
I won't stop
dreaming
waiting
for her to walk
into my life
she's all I'm thinking
about she makes me feel
alright
she will complete me
make me happy
I will see her
make it snappy
before she gets away

I want to meet her today
an alibi for my sins
riding shotgun on my hell-bound
life
keeping me on track along the way

Thinking about her makes life
easier
brings a spark of hope
to my failure of a life
Though I've waited for
so long and she has yet to appear
I will keep waiting right here
in what I currently call hell
where pain and embarrassment
lurk
around every corner
where nothing can be
done right

I'll wait in
desperate
pleading
undying
hope that she will come and then
I'll truly fall in love.
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I've written one other song about the same person; an Australian lesbo that quite possibly doesn't exist. Anyway I'm looking for constructive criticism and possibly a title idea.

Completely cliched yet it seems refreshingly honest. I like it's simplicity. Sometimes these are the best lyrics.

I was wrong, this isn't even mildly interesting... it isn't about anything, it tries too hard to be about something and it tries too hard to be "deep_and_depressing". It's neither. The rhymes are mediocre, also.

ok I understand this was one of my earlier writings so I kinda thought it sucked myself just needed to know if I was alone are there anymore you're interested in? or did this one turn you off my writing forever?

My thoughts exactly.

thanks. I'm trying to edit a little bit make it a little more catchy and turn it into a song instead of just a poem