Shooting Down The Sun (quote, hands)

The Dave · 04-05-2007, 04:29 PM

I can't say what I want to, words hold no meaning for
I've shot myself in the foot, and everyone else
Is grabbing at their back for relief.
I'm not exactly sure when or how I
Came to be this mindless youth but I'm
On my knees with both hands cupped in front of me.
My eyes drowned long ago from my conscience's waves
And I can't say that I blame it for allowing
That leak to appear.
I shot at the sun and all its fellow stars and it
was so much more than a foolish thing to do.
I guess that's what it takes if you want to be alone,
Just stab at everyone around you but
I sure do miss that feeling of company.
So I'll wait, I'll wait for all the back wounds to heal
If that's what it takes though I
Sure do hate to feel alone but 'Sorry' just can't be enough.

Crowe · 04-05-2007, 06:38 PM

I'm not exactly sure when or how I
Same to be this mindless youth but I'm Did you mean "seem"?

to fo. to do

Hey man. Just go ahead and clean it up a little. Make a second run through, see if you like everything... and then give it an edit. I feel like you might have rushed through this.

The Dave · 04-07-2007, 01:31 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crowe

I'm not exactly sure when or how I
Same to be this mindless youth but I'm Did you mean "seem"?

to fo. to do

Hey man. Just go ahead and clean it up a little. Make a second run through, see if you like everything... and then give it an edit. I feel like you might have rushed through this.

Lmao, yeah, I definitely rushed thorugh with the typing. I'll clean it up now.

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04-05-2007, 04:29 PM
The Dave Me and The Major Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Kentucky Posts: 1,887	Shooting Down The Sun I can't say what I want to, words hold no meaning for I've shot myself in the foot, and everyone else Is grabbing at their back for relief. I'm not exactly sure when or how I Came to be this mindless youth but I'm On my knees with both hands cupped in front of me. My eyes drowned long ago from my conscience's waves And I can't say that I blame it for allowing That leak to appear. I shot at the sun and all its fellow stars and it was so much more than a foolish thing to do. I guess that's what it takes if you want to be alone, Just stab at everyone around you but I sure do miss that feeling of company. So I'll wait, I'll wait for all the back wounds to heal If that's what it takes though I Sure do hate to feel alone but 'Sorry' just can't be enough. __________________ My collection,winkwinkcoughcough Last edited by The Dave : 04-07-2007 at 01:35 PM.

04-05-2007, 06:38 PM
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: Chicago/St. Louie Posts: 676	I'm not exactly sure when or how I Same to be this mindless youth but I'm Did you mean "seem"? to fo. to do Hey man. Just go ahead and clean it up a little. Make a second run through, see if you like everything... and then give it an edit. I feel like you might have rushed through this. __________________ Hi. I'm Crowe. This is my sig. My love finally resting, A solemn corpse buried in you. My silly experimental band: www.myspace.com/boyfromthestarsmusic