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Originally Posted by aveneficus
all right well i read this before and didn't comment. i guess that's because you were right when you said this is a common thing.
the whole thing was really just a rant poorly structured into a confusing, harsh sounding rhyme scheme.
there's nothing wrong with writing to vent or whatever, but this wasn't exactly my cup of tea
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If I were to redo it, then what would you suggest I change?
Perhaps to make it more original and unique; or is it at the point of no return
and there is no way to recover this one?