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sleepy jack · 02-09-2008, 10:13 PM

I tried that just now, there's actually 3 different guitars in here 4 guitar parts total. I did the drone thing I already had going twice (a few milliseconds apart) and then added two outtakes I did one was a constant strumming the other was a more frequent strumming than the last one, I also increased the sound a bit.

Do you think it sounds better? It kind of drowns out the piano at points.

Also if this one sounds slightly better do you think I should loop the piano again so it plays for the outro (and maybe add something else so its different then the whole thing) or leave the outro as the distortion?

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tkpb938 · 02-09-2008, 10:46 PM

Hmmm... I think you cut it off to soon. I'd let the distortion slowly fade out into nothing.

Its interesting and I see your vision, however I think it needs refinement.

Lizzie · 02-09-2008, 11:20 PM

I think the best part about it was the simplisity of it, I don't think you should add lots of other crazy stuff to it...something like the strings would be effective, but I don't think it should be overdone, if that makes any sense

tkpb938 · 02-09-2008, 11:22 PM

Yep, the simplicity is quite a bit of its charm i think.

~~The Unfan~~ · 02-09-2008, 11:28 PM

Seconding the simplicity notion. It gives it a kind of atmosphere. Too much more and you'd lose the eeriness of it.

sleepy jack · 02-10-2008, 06:53 PM

So is the second version (with louder and more guitars) better than the first (with quieter and less guitars)? And should I let the distortion fade out or let the piano be the outro?

Laces Out Dan! · 02-10-2008, 07:35 PM

Its no "City Streets and Two Tone Beats"

Or better yet, that newest Untitled Jinx Removing song...Which I really cant wait to hear a good recording of.

sleepy jack · 02-10-2008, 09:17 PM

By Tuesday I'll have a demo finished. I have my one song and then an intro/outro that people may think are haunting and dope or think are trash. I plan to record two more songs over the next two days.

02-09-2008, 11:20 PM	#13 (permalink)
Lizzie Diskobox Join Date: Jan 2008 Location: vancouver Posts: 660	I think the best part about it was the simplisity of it, I don't think you should add lots of other crazy stuff to it...something like the strings would be effective, but I don't think it should be overdone, if that makes any sense __________________ white and black, are you looking for the sun boy? the sun doesn't shine down here, no, not in the shadow

02-10-2008, 07:35 PM	#17 (permalink)
Laces Out Dan! I love Puck Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: British Columbia Posts: 4,614	Its no "City Streets and Two Tone Beats" Or better yet, that newest Untitled Jinx Removing song...Which I really cant wait to hear a good recording of. __________________ We are entirely smooth, We admit to the truth, We are the best at what we do.

02-09-2008, 10:46 PM	#12 (permalink)
tkpb938 Lvl 70 Troll Hunter Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Sunny Phoenix Posts: 482	Hmmm... I think you cut it off to soon. I'd let the distortion slowly fade out into nothing. Its interesting and I see your vision, however I think it needs refinement.

02-09-2008, 11:22 PM	#14 (permalink)
tkpb938 Lvl 70 Troll Hunter Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Sunny Phoenix Posts: 482	Yep, the simplicity is quite a bit of its charm i think.

02-09-2008, 11:28 PM	#15 (permalink)
~~The Unfan~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Dec 2006 Location: Methville Posts: 2,116	Seconding the simplicity notion. It gives it a kind of atmosphere. Too much more and you'd lose the eeriness of it.