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Old 11-23-2004, 06:35 AM   #11 (permalink)
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i think its pretty good, i like the the way it tells a story. 6 id say. got a bit confused at first when u kept saying "fined", take it you mean find?! and the "hello hello" for some totally strange reason reminded of the lional richie cheese monstrosity we call "Hello?"- but that isnt your fault, just my stupid thought process. so overall, nice lyrics.
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Old 11-23-2004, 12:05 PM   #12 (permalink)
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it wasnt too bad. but id be careful posting my lyrics on the net. its thick as thieves out there.
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Old 11-27-2004, 12:14 AM   #13 (permalink)
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definently way too similar to pink flloyd - comfortably numb
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