Official ATTN thread (lyrics, members, quote, talented, song)

sleepy jack · 12-18-2006, 10:54 PM

I locked this and i'm going to be a bitch, since you're taking stabs at my lyrical ability I will also actually, i'll just post your 'lyrics' and let people decide themselves.

Quote:

Originally Posted by CityLightsLikeRain

Scream my name
Rip me apart
The pain helps me see
And, oh, how I love it

(He's in your head
Like his nails in your back)

I want you to lie to me
I love it when you want me
I hate it when you're here,
so back the **** off

(My heart burns for you
I love you but I just dont want you)

Quote:

Originally Posted by CityLightsLikeRain

Dizziness sets in
Is this really what I want?
I ask myself in darkness
With the cigarette burning inches of its life and years of mine

Fantastical ideas of the abstract love
An thought it is....and so it shall be
Commitment is word used only by the secure
And the unstable suffer with tragedy after tragedy.

Looking back hurts
Differing the truth from lie
Makes me cry
Inside, makes me die.

So you toyed with me, had your fun
Hope you're happy because i'm not
This is what I get for falling for you
And this song what you get for ****ing with a 17-year old

Quote:

Originally Posted by CityLightsLikeRain

It felt like a beautiful day,
(Hope you felt the same too)
Just knowing I would see you.

Each day creeps by so slower…..slower.
And my heart falls lower.

I loved your touch, it was so perfect and right,
I want you to wrap your arm around my shoulder tight,
And tell me “I love you” once more.

Each night creeps by so lonely…cold
And with you I’d like to grow old.

I fell so hard and fell so fast,
I really wished that it could last,
Now all that fills me are memories of the past.

I still love you immensely,
Think of you endlessly,
I hope that right now you’re happy,
Even if its not with me,
And we will be together soon.

sleepy jack · 12-18-2006, 10:56 PM

actually, i'm going to let everyones anger play out then clean it up
cheers

Laces Out Dan! · 12-18-2006, 10:57 PM

Rofl @ The Lyrixxxx

~~[MERIT]~~ · 12-18-2006, 10:58 PM

****ing****assbitch*********suckingmymother****in* ***allmother****ingnightwithmy****sofarupyour****i ngassthatyoullchokeand****ingdie.

sleepy jack · 12-18-2006, 10:59 PM

Let it all out oojay, let it all out.

DearJenny · 12-18-2006, 11:00 PM

I didnt take any stabs at your lyrical ability. I've left numorous comments saying I like your lyrics, look back. You're not the only one posting in that part of the forum. And I never claimed to be a lyricist in the least, I posted those lyrics to get some feedback and develop into a better songwriter, not just a composer. Thanks for being an ass, really. Hope you're happy.

And to Jibber, check my comment and you'll see the word MOST. Its a word modifier that leaves exclusions.

sleepy jack · 12-18-2006, 11:01 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by CityLightsLikeRain

I'm not stupid! I'm opinioned, headstrong and somewhat talented. Music tast aside, I'm a valuble member. At least I dont write overly emotional lyrics like some members.

Seeing as I was the only songwriting arguing I took that as a stab at me.

DearJenny · 12-18-2006, 11:02 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crowquill

Seeing as I was the only songwriting arguing I took that as a stab at me.

I can include everyone in an arguement, honestly, I have bigger grudges against other members over you.

~~[MERIT]~~ · 12-18-2006, 11:03 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Crowquill

Let it all out oojay, let it all out.

********************************************crowqu illsass***********twosheepandanalbinodonkey******* ******andjibbertoobuttwiceashard

sleepy jack · 12-18-2006, 11:03 PM

From what I gathered out of that, i'm VERY disturbed.

12-18-2006, 10:57 PM	#133 (permalink)
Laces Out Dan! I love Puck Join Date: Sep 2005 Location: British Columbia Posts: 4,614	Rofl @ The Lyrixxxx __________________ We are entirely smooth, We admit to the truth, We are the best at what we do.

12-18-2006, 11:00 PM	#136 (permalink)
DearJenny Raptor Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Metro Detroit, MI Posts: 1,321	ATTN: Crowquill I didnt take any stabs at your lyrical ability. I've left numorous comments saying I like your lyrics, look back. You're not the only one posting in that part of the forum. And I never claimed to be a lyricist in the least, I posted those lyrics to get some feedback and develop into a better songwriter, not just a composer. Thanks for being an ass, really. Hope you're happy. And to Jibber, check my comment and you'll see the word MOST. Its a word modifier that leaves exclusions. __________________ So here's to living life miserable. And here's to all the lonely stories that I've told. Maybe drinking wine will validate my sorrow. Every man needs a muse and mine could be the bottle.

12-18-2006, 10:58 PM	#134 (permalink)
~~[MERIT]~~ Account Disabled Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Missouri, USA Posts: 4,814	**ingassbitch*****suckingmymother*in *allmotheringnightwithmysofarupyouri ngassthatyoullchokeand**ingdie.