What are you Writing now?

Trollheart · 05-15-2018, 04:36 PM

Oh holy good ****! I just realised!

Spoiler for holy ****!!!!!!!!:

Man, you are a goddamn genius!

Oriphiel · 05-15-2018, 04:57 PM

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Originally Posted by Trollheart

Oh holy good ****! I just realised!

Spoiler for holy ****!!!!!!!!:

Maaaaaybe...

OccultHawk · 05-17-2018, 12:57 AM

Never Got To Go by OccultHawk

A man woke up every morning and told himself today was not his day to die. He ended up living forever.

Trollheart · 05-20-2018, 09:30 AM

Ori, would you be interested in returning the favour? I'm kind of done posting stuff here (nearly) as it either gets ignored or Hawk pounces on it and rips out its throat before it even has time to scream for help, but as a fellow writer (shut up, Hawk!) I value your opinion highly, and I'd love to get your feedback on my stories. Maybe you're too busy, but if you have the time I can send you some of the ones I've written so far.

I guess anyone else who's interested can have them too, but I doubt that figure will rise above zero.

Oriphiel · 05-20-2018, 08:01 PM

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Originally Posted by Trollheart

Ori, would you be interested in returning the favour? I'm kind of done posting stuff here (nearly) as it either gets ignored or Hawk pounces on it and rips out its throat before it even has time to scream for help, but as a fellow writer (shut up, Hawk!) I value your opinion highly, and I'd love to get your feedback on my stories. Maybe you're too busy, but if you have the time I can send you some of the ones I've written so far.

I guess anyone else who's interested can have them too, but I doubt that figure will rise above zero.

Sorry, I thought I responded to this earlier. I could swear I hit "submit reply" and everything. Weird.

Anyway, yeah, totally! I'm kinda busy with work, but if you've got some short stories you want feedback on, then send them my way.

Trollheart · 05-22-2018, 12:56 PM

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Originally Posted by Oriphiel

Sorry, I thought I responded to this earlier. I could swear I hit "submit reply" and everything. Weird.

Anyway, yeah, totally! I'm kinda busy with work, but if you've got some short stories you want feedback on, then send them my way.

Thanks man. Appreciate it. I'll have to take some time to tidy some of them up, finish others, but I'll be in touch.

#WritersUnite

Ashwell John · 05-29-2018, 02:20 AM

Right now working on a project for my class assignment.

Oriphiel · 07-23-2018, 11:21 AM

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Originally Posted by OccultHawk

Never Got To Go by OccultHawk

A man woke up every morning and told himself today was not his day to die. He ended up living forever.

Always Got To Go by Orificus

A man was kidnapped and chained in a basement, where he was raped every day for years. The one thing that kept him going until his rescue was the assurance that life couldn't possibly get any worse for him.

After his release, he tried to make ends meet as a postal worker. A few months later, he paid someone to put him back in the basement.

Oriphiel · 07-23-2018, 06:48 PM

Occult Cock by G. L. Ori Hole

There once was a man who lived life on the edge. YOLO was his policy. Then he got his dick caught in a lawn mower in a misadventure, and it became YODO.

Well Shit by Ori On Zabelt

You could die at any moment from an aneurysm, even as you're reading th

Oriphiel · 08-25-2018, 10:03 AM

Woke up at like 3:00 A.M. and wrote a 6,000 word short story about a revolution that was started by someone farting.

05-15-2018, 04:36 PM	#701 (permalink)
Trollheart Born to be mild Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: 404 Not Found Posts: 26,971	Oh holy good **! I just realised! Spoiler** for holy **!!!!!!!!: Motor Girl turning up at Dan's door, at the very moment he's about to shoot himself, isn't at all coincidental, is it? That's his mother, sending her and the others to give him something to solve, something to fight for, something to live for. Like any mother, she wouldn't want her son killing himself, so she did the only thing she could, even though it resulted in her having to sacrifice herself! Man, you are a goddamn genius! __________________ Trollheart: Signature-free since April 2018

05-17-2018, 12:57 AM	#703 (permalink)
OccultHawk one-balled nipple jockey Join Date: Dec 2010 Location: Dirty Souf Biatch Posts: 22,033	Never Got To Go by OccultHawk A man woke up every morning and told himself today was not his day to die. He ended up living forever. __________________ 2016 2017 2018 2019 2020 Member of the Year & Journal of the Year Champion Behold the Writing of THE LEGEND: https://www.musicbanter.com/members-...p-lighter.html

05-20-2018, 09:30 AM	#704 (permalink)
Trollheart Born to be mild Join Date: Oct 2008 Location: 404 Not Found Posts: 26,971	Ori, would you be interested in returning the favour? I'm kind of done posting stuff here (nearly) as it either gets ignored or Hawk pounces on it and rips out its throat before it even has time to scream for help, but as a fellow writer (shut up, Hawk!) I value your opinion highly, and I'd love to get your feedback on my stories. Maybe you're too busy, but if you have the time I can send you some of the ones I've written so far. I guess anyone else who's interested can have them too, but I doubt that figure will rise above zero. __________________ Trollheart: Signature-free since April 2018

07-23-2018, 06:48 PM	#709 (permalink)
Oriphiel Ask me how! Join Date: Oct 2014 Location: The States Posts: 5,355	Occult Cock by G. L. Ori Hole There once was a man who lived life on the edge. YOLO was his policy. Then he got his dick caught in a lawn mower in a misadventure, and it became YODO. Well Shit by Ori On Zabelt You could die at any moment from an aneurysm, even as you're reading th __________________ ---------------------- \|---Mic's Albums---\| ---------------------- ----------------------------- \|---Deafbox Industries---\| -----------------------------

08-25-2018, 10:03 AM	#710 (permalink)
Oriphiel Ask me how! Join Date: Oct 2014 Location: The States Posts: 5,355	Woke up at like 3:00 A.M. and wrote a 6,000 word short story about a revolution that was started by someone farting. __________________ ---------------------- \|---Mic's Albums---\| ---------------------- ----------------------------- \|---Deafbox Industries---\| -----------------------------

05-29-2018, 02:20 AM	#707 (permalink)
Ashwell John Music Addict Join Date: Feb 2015 Posts: 100	Right now working on a project for my class assignment.