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Old 08-31-2014, 05:15 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Thought: When the night comes
When the night comes
Covers the sky and faces with its darkness
I'm alone in my bedroom
Looking at my bed
I'm alone
I wish you here
I wish to touch your hair
To kiss your soft skin
To smell your clothes and your chest
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Old 08-31-2014, 07:46 AM   #2 (permalink)
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You wish to smell someone's chest?
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Old 08-31-2014, 09:23 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Smells like fresh boobies in here.
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Old 08-31-2014, 10:37 AM   #4 (permalink)
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You wish to smell someone's chest?
Thought is kind of writing close to poems but I'm beginner, nice to meet you.
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Old 08-31-2014, 10:40 AM   #5 (permalink)
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May be smells of love
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Old 08-31-2014, 11:18 AM   #6 (permalink)
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When the night comes
Covers the sky and faces with its darkness
I'm alone in my bedroom
Looking at my bed
I'm alone
I wish you here
I wish to touch your hair
To kiss your soft skin
To smell your clothes and your chest


if you want to show your poems use the writing section if you want to be taken seriously.
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Old 08-31-2014, 11:55 AM   #7 (permalink)
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if you want to show your poems use the writing section if you want to be taken seriously.
I found song writing section, but I think it's not for beginners like me but I'll try it.
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Old 08-31-2014, 12:19 PM   #8 (permalink)
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I found song writing section, but I think it's not for beginners like me but I'll try it.
It's not just for songs it's also for poems.
Don't be afraid to post them just cause you're just a beginner we all have to start somewhere and we don't start by being great at it that's something you build up to once you start writing constantly.

im not a very good poet myself but i share my stuff and try to learn something from the critiques ppl give me.
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Old 08-31-2014, 11:02 PM   #10 (permalink)
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When the night comes
Covers the sky and faces with its darkness
I'm alone in my bedroom
Looking at my bed
I'm alone
I wish you here
I wish to touch your hair
To kiss your soft skin
To smell your clothes and your chest

ME TOO

WANNA BANG

CALL ME



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