Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
04-20-2008, 04:30 AM
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please review
lyrics to an as-of-yet-untitled song.
with your tongue free of teeth you'll scream satellites
and swallow a sun that never shines
your eyes swelled to immeasurable size
raining on us it feels...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
04-19-2008, 07:20 PM
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The Unfortunate Jilting of Sandra Rivers
she carries herself well
seeing but never speaking
sifting instants like sand
holding out for a diamond
she always kept herself a secret
a storybook to be written
so he filled you up with words...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
03-31-2008, 06:05 AM
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Replies: 2
Views: 1,072
new song
here are some lyrics to an as-of-yet unnamed song.
you laid and the seasons brought you sleep was it everything you hoped for girl did the grass fold and snap under your back did the branches beg...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-11-2008, 02:57 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 1,473
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-08-2008, 04:07 AM
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Replies: 0
Views: 1,028
Lyrics
The lyrics are based on a short sci-fi story I wrote. I've included a short synopsis below to hopefully help with interpretation.
There's a scientist. He's feeling pretty bitter about his...
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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry
01-08-2008, 03:26 AM
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Replies: 3
Views: 1,473
Review Please
cool wind on water
chasing waves in winter
and echoing endlessly
in the misty morning haze
waves lift and linger
rolling lost and landing
when at last they reach the sand
the ocean pulls...
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