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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-10-2009, 07:32 PM
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Posted By Rubber
thanks for the support guys.

thanks for the support guys.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-03-2009, 02:33 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
unt. #4 loose ankles loose muscles loose...

unt. #4
loose ankles
loose muscles
loose lips
lilted little leeway tunnels left vacant for the acquittal
less stones on the shore
more mud on the water
nothin' like the love of a father for...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-29-2009, 08:34 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
interpret if only I could decipher the language...

interpret
if only I could decipher the language of heartbeat
speak the tongue of eye shift
sing the song of key word
no more traipsing through dead garden
no more
no longer
interim head...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-25-2009, 11:58 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
novelty honesty was just a passing dream an...

novelty
honesty was just a passing dream
an old friend I had grown apart from
now objecting silently in the corner.
my neurons clamor
firing out the latest piston chic.
my thoughts have been...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 05-27-2009, 02:19 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
woo I like this whole merge deal.

woo I like this whole merge deal.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-24-2009, 04:39 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
okay.

okay.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-21-2009, 01:47 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
yeah go ahead dreadnaught.

yeah go ahead dreadnaught.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-20-2009, 06:37 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
I can honestly say I really don't like this one...

I can honestly say I really don't like this one at all. I'd disagree about it not being poetry, but it's still really bad. I'd delete it if I could.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-19-2009, 07:51 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
*shrug*

open up and receive
the crackling of cardboard vessels
pulmonary and pure.
wiffle ball functioneer
of oxygen withdrawal.

doppelgängered from Han Solo mold
and so is sewn, the smiles of the...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-18-2009, 01:50 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
it's just a continuation of the lines.

it's just a continuation of the lines.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 04-11-2009, 12:47 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
Pray with me

deleted.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-26-2009, 08:42 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
just a stylistic thing I felt like trying out....

just a stylistic thing I felt like trying out. skewing the word skewed.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-24-2009, 08:37 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
Punch

The shadows of weeds emerge
from cracks in the sidewalk to
chew my shoe laces.

You land butterfly kisses on my knuckles
just
before the punch
That displaces air like
jigsaw magic.
It...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-22-2009, 12:41 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
Hm...doesn't look like I can change the name. Oh...

Hm...doesn't look like I can change the name. Oh well.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-22-2009, 11:49 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
thanks that means a lot :) I completely forgot...

thanks that means a lot :)
I completely forgot about that movie until after I named it haha.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-22-2009, 08:13 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
Hot Fuzz

Hot fuzz grows from the pores
Of my wood paneled walls.
Sustained by the same stale air
That now sits stagnant in my lungs.
It has been over saturated
With repeated phrases.
Miscarriages of...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-20-2009, 01:00 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
thank you :)

thank you :)
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-19-2009, 01:59 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
Laying down

It's happening
the weight of it percolates through my skull
with all the elegance of a cheese grater
the sting lingers
bleaching my bones
which by now are being held together with red ribbons...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-03-2009, 08:22 AM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
haha that's pretty funny =) I think you're...

haha that's pretty funny =)

I think you're right about the line breaks, I hesitated to go on a line break spree. I think I will try to revise this too.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 03-01-2009, 06:00 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
Protect Yourself

I don't get out much anymore
I stay home
alone
watching
windows

And I've been sleeping on the floor
I don't know
how to
escape
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-05-2009, 02:41 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
The beginning is actually supposed to be a...

The beginning is actually supposed to be a repeated thing with the second line being said once at the end, I don't know if that changes your opinion of it. I need to start marking those kinds of...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 02-04-2009, 08:46 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
song, spectrum

maybe I'll get some feedback this time?

spectrum
Let me show you my true colors. x3
Let me show you what lies between these colors.

Oh twisted spectrum
Let's go and get some
More of what we...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-28-2009, 01:05 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
badump. new.

badump. new.
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-26-2009, 09:47 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
where I'll post everything from now on

because it's better to keep this **** contained.
P.S. any feedback would be nice
1 a storm, a hole
A crooked rapier of light
Thrust down at the horizon
Left sonic races
To ripple outward...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 01-11-2009, 01:12 PM
Replies: 62
Views: 7,272
Posted By Rubber
fix'd. sort of.

fix'd. sort of.
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