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Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 12-13-2009, 11:52 AM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
I like this song allot--it expresses my...

I like this song allot--it expresses my sentiments towards conflict. No truth except the truth of conflict right? lol. Anyways, I only have two critiques this time for you:

1. your a little too...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-02-2009, 05:33 PM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
No, those are sortof lame arguments. We know...

No, those are sortof lame arguments. We know it's metaphorical for a bigger more economically based mass murdering.



It really is a brilliant book. I know you would love it. Read it twice.
...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 11-01-2009, 01:50 PM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
It's catchy, but social sciences define 'wants'...

It's catchy, but social sciences define 'wants' as specific needs. (I'm hungry, so I'll eat this etc.) The last line is the only one that is non-refutable. In order to make that stanza work, you...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 10-10-2009, 07:13 AM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
"Carnivore" was very good, although I was tempted...

"Carnivore" was very good, although I was tempted not to read it because of the name. Sigh. Actually, I personally think it's your best yet. The rhyming at the end made it that much more...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-28-2009, 03:42 PM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
I can understand where Vegangelica is coming...

I can understand where Vegangelica is coming from. Normally, the biggest issue when we come to the meat industry is factory farming. Conditions can be very extreme for animals in factory...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 09-26-2009, 09:58 AM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
xD I dunno, I used to know a couple o' boyscouts...

xD I dunno, I used to know a couple o' boyscouts who would take hairspray to campouts for that reason. Being afraid of fire is instinctive, but being attracted to it is also true.

Either way,...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-27-2009, 09:12 PM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
I think you've found your niché--it's not really...

I think you've found your niché--it's not really love songs, but you are a master at storytelling. You have proven yourself best at that, thus far, and your song Africa--that's what it needs. It...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-19-2009, 05:38 PM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
I personally would've found a metaphor that would...

I personally would've found a metaphor that would be consistant through the entire song (for instance, I've got a song back in my thread that uses a train as a reference to progression and success). ...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-18-2009, 09:38 PM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
It's an interesting song--much wider scope than...

It's an interesting song--much wider scope than your previous work. I honestly would've approached it completely differently, but that's beside the point. My issue is with length. You may be...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-09-2009, 05:28 PM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
why thank you for the kind response. I will be...

why thank you for the kind response. I will be waiting patiently for some new material.

peace,
-nick
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-07-2009, 09:39 AM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
You should've said that to begin with! Now...

You should've said that to begin with! Now there's a whole new perspective on the situation--I had at first thought you were some incredibly wary and talented teenager (as most here are just kids). ...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-06-2009, 08:41 PM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
poetry is a depiction, change provides context. ...

poetry is a depiction, change provides context. I guess there are other ways to achieve context (like a good backstory), but if you don't have context, than a poem falls quite easily under the stare...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 08-06-2009, 11:40 AM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
@VEGANGELICA Look, I'm going to be quite...

@VEGANGELICA

Look, I'm going to be quite frank here. You've got something to say, and I deeply respect that. You've got some O.K. poetry here, and although your criticisms are probably overdone,...
Forum: Song Writing, Lyrics and Poetry 07-28-2009, 07:13 PM
Replies: 367
Views: 59,481
Posted By Nicktarist
I like your pieces. Interesting, not perfect,...

I like your pieces. Interesting, not perfect, but very good. Unfortunately, I'm not going to spend too much time here, but I'd like to make one small note:

In the song "Africa", you make it a...
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