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Old 11-24-2005, 01:18 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Instead of songs I write poetry, feel free to comment. And if others want to post poetry in here, do. I'm sure these poems could be turned into songs?

Skin Deep

Light shimmers against your face,
It twists, bends and reflects,
Enhancing your crystal green eyes,
And a never-ending smile.

I hold onto this moment and gaze,
No words spoken, just touch.
Every crest, every line, every curve,
A slow and gentle understanding.

Hours pass with pleasent ease,
The lake in which we swim, chills.
The heat between us is fire,
It burns so bright.

You're my second skin.

I wrote that instead of doing Statistics work! Should I of bothered?

God’s Little Angels

As every snowflake falls
A tear drops for you, sister
Every smiling child now weeps
Over lies they thought were true

Blood red petals lay on their bodies
Valleys of their shadows wander
Reunited through heaven in the end
Memories of laughter and wonder

But grief gouges inside me
The sun scolds my temper
It burns within so quietly
Apart of me wants to turn black

Those eyes have lost their innocence
Stripped away, stolen
Mommies and daddies are in mourning
Our hearts are no longer golden

The roses of life have wilted
The scent of magic is a whisper
Guide me O Lord I’m breaking down
I love her, I lost her, I miss her…


Bring Out My Soul

Breathe on me...
Tint my skin with a moment
It tingles through my veins
Like a breeze of sparkled silver

Chase me through the long grass
Rain touched, it glistens
Contagious this feeling
Yet no-one is here but us

The sky's high on smoke
Desperate for a new life
It's chronic depression
Crys throughout the night

Shine down like the stars
Enlighten me deep inside
The blackness is hiding away
With the flower that quietly wilts

The blanket over our eyes
It blinds green with black
Glowing with uncertainty
We innocently interact

And lastly:

SS

My body feels as warm as ice
I drink it anyway, from a dead thirst
A drive to cloud up the everclear road
A path of tangles and burns

Yet a sunlight of dancing and quiet dreams
Kisses my soul incomplete
A heart of a red rose does touch me
Whispers of a shadow nearing

She is a beautiful ocean jewel
Crashes onto the world like silk
To even look at the magical girl
Is a heaven portrait untamed

I respect such a talent formed
I pray for her future to be glamour
Golden gifts of credit
Will push a new beginning

The thorns of blood engraved
Blow away in a gale of green
She leans down to my level
Unexpected to be seen

Those who know her love her
Like she is never comming home
But this angel's wings are strongly cemented
I now never feel cold

Keep your moonlight glow alive
You'll never be underestimated
Bound to be a star shining
Cleverly, here you are
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Old 11-24-2005, 01:29 AM   #2 (permalink)
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thanks for giving us the permission

and i promise i'll read them later on
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Old 11-24-2005, 01:42 AM   #3 (permalink)
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Lol! That would be nice.
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Old 11-24-2005, 05:30 AM   #4 (permalink)
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These were good. Reading 4 atmospherically vague poems in a row has slightly dazed me. These could definitely be turned into songs, as they have a good rhythm to them and nice phrasing. I'll not try it myself though, as it'd work much better sung by a girl with a very soft voice...

Don't forget to do your statistics work though!
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Old 11-27-2005, 03:58 AM   #5 (permalink)
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I'll be sweet, Statistics is my easiest subject!

And thanks.

They are very metal I know! \m/
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