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11-26-2005, 02:25 PM | #1 (permalink) |
[[la de da diddy da]]
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Fade (The Snow Will End Us)
I was bored. It was snowing. And this is the **** result of it. Tut. I'd really like some feedback, though.
-- Fade (The Snow Will End Us) (c)2005 Lexxi Stone Its snows and then it fades And then it snows again and covers the spots. And we think everything will be ok. *dramatic piano* But it wont be (no it won't be) Because its cold outside. (Because its cold outside) And the snow keeps on falling. Until it fades. (fades) And then it comes again Only to cover what was left behind. Left Behind. The Snow Will End Us (oh it will end us) Because it's cold outside (Because it's cold outside) And what is covered fades again. (fades again) Fades again. Fades again. Fades again. *guitar solo* The Snow Will End Us. The Snow Will End Us! Will End Us. Oh...It will certainly end us. Now fade. (fade) End Us. End Us. *end guitar....piano take 10 second fading solo.* __
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11-27-2005, 06:55 PM | #4 (permalink) |
killedmyraindog
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if this was about nuclear winter, and you tied it to it more concretely, you could swing it, your "dramatic piano" part really makes it hard to take seriously.
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11-27-2005, 08:23 PM | #6 (permalink) |
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yeah well if we sat around taking pot shots at things that weren't supposed to be credible to begin with it would get old third post in.
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11-28-2005, 07:58 AM | #7 (permalink) | |
They call me Tundra Boy
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