Majestic Darkness (the roots)

Ma Cherie · 01-05-2006, 12:22 PM

Majestic Darkness

shallow looks
deep water eyes
saddness and myrth
they intertwine
like the roots
of a long dead vine

love and loss
the truth be told
all that is
was never gold

life and love
flutter so soft
becomes the wings
of a a pure white dove

such thoughts beguile
my sad hearts fancy
such things as these
make me antsy

the truth be known
in the dark nights hour
what then shall become
of all ones power

my heart stands still
and beats no more
it cries but a trill
in the midnights noir

to where lies the truth
in the word lenore
nameless again
forever more.

Ma Cherie · 01-05-2006, 02:28 PM

bump

Crazy Luv · 01-05-2006, 02:30 PM

go ahead with ya bad left! Very dark, but still good.

Ma Cherie · 01-05-2006, 02:36 PM

thanks tok awhile to write.... got so writers block for a bit.

sleepy jack · 01-05-2006, 03:01 PM

Congrats on sucking.

madeinNY · 01-05-2006, 05:17 PM

I liked it...but it did seem a bit idle....it's WAY depressing, but good if you like depressing... I give it 8 out of 10.

01-05-2006, 12:22 PM	#1 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	Majestic Darkness Majestic Darkness shallow looks deep water eyes saddness and myrth they intertwine like the roots of a long dead vine love and loss the truth be told all that is was never gold life and love flutter so soft becomes the wings of a a pure white dove such thoughts beguile my sad hearts fancy such things as these make me antsy the truth be known in the dark nights hour what then shall become of all ones power my heart stands still and beats no more it cries but a trill in the midnights noir to where lies the truth in the word lenore nameless again forever more. __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

01-05-2006, 02:28 PM	#2 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	bump __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

01-05-2006, 02:36 PM	#4 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	thanks tok awhile to write.... got so writers block for a bit. __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

01-05-2006, 05:17 PM	#6 (permalink)
madeinNY [[la de da diddy da]] Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: NY...duh. Posts: 444	I liked it...but it did seem a bit idle....it's WAY depressing, but good if you like depressing... I give it 8 out of 10. __________________ I cleared out my PM box...I promise. lol

01-05-2006, 02:30 PM	#3 (permalink)
Crazy Luv a l'amou fou pou tout Join Date: Dec 2005 Location: NY Posts: 355	go ahead with ya bad left! Very dark, but still good.