Crowe

Sorry PHAP, you're wrong here. Crowquill had no problem with it, ToolGuy divined his own meaning from it. My girlfriend loved it, as well as a few of my friends... honestly, I think you're the only one who has expressed confusion over it's meaning. That being said: you can't make the blanket statement of "People aren't going to get that" because you don't get it yourself. I think you scanned over it, without really reading it and made a hasty statement. If you look at it again, it's pretty obvious what the piece is about.


CROWQUILL - I agreed with the heart thing, changed it to life. Thank you for pointing that out.

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Trauma

Just because you're too fucking retarded to use your mind outside of an obligatory governmental juicing process doesn't mean that Crowe's poem is now devoid of all value.

His ability shows much more thought and creativity than your damned inside-the-box mentality has revealed to me since you've joined this forum.

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PaperHurricanesAndPlanes

Hahahahaha. Someone's on the rag, eh, Snickers?

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Trauma

No, you're just an idiot.

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ZeppelinAir

its well done, but it just have the impact that some of your others had

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Crowe

Yeah, I can see how that would happen. It's weird you know? I could write a tragic story all of the time, but then you guys would get pretty tired of that I think. So every once in awhile I try to have one with a little positive intonation, but I'm not quite as adept at those as I am telling stories that make you sad. Does that say something about me? Lol.

And PHAP, he went off on you because when you found out that you didn't get something that was pretty simple, you labeled it "worthless". Now you're my boy, so I don't know exactly what you're thinking doing that - if it were anyone else I prob. would have gone off on them, because that's an ignorant statement - but I honestly couldn't tell if you were joking or not. So that's that.

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PaperHurricanesAndPlanes

Lol. I guess worthless was a little far. I still didn't like it though. But you know I got nothing but respect for you, man. And Snickers still went off the handle like a child.

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Trauma

I'm sorry that I regard that as a completely immature response with no sense of thought backing it whatsoever.

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ZeppelinAir

its all a matter of what your most Comfortable with, you have a lot of talent writing Tragedy . and IMO you can put more heart and soul into something with Tragedy . something uplifting cant have as much serious imagery as a Tragedy.

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Trauma

Both can be just as good.

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