Crowe's Songwriting Collection

Crowe · 10-15-2007, 03:41 PM

yeah, upload it somewhere for me~ thanks bro

Warren · 10-15-2007, 10:26 PM

cute.

I wish I could hear it how you hear it, though.
produce it.

ProggyMan · 10-15-2007, 10:57 PM

I'd love to hear Frank Zappa do this.

Crowe · 10-16-2007, 12:42 PM

I'm getting those juices back...

My Relationship With Carly's Door

Carly what's got you stuck inside?
Are you really crying on the rug?
Because I'm outside on your porch singing.
If you wanted to smile for a minute or two,
I'm outside on your porch singing.
What's got your cheeks wet, tonight?
Carly please come to reason, I'm on your porch.

I could say the most beautiful things,
Ignite the smile on you forever more,
But right now honey, I'm only singing to your door.

Carly what's got you sobbing inside?
Are the tissues piling up?
Because I'm outside on your porch singing.
If you wanted to laugh for a minute or two,
I'm outside on your porch singing.
What's got you choking back words tonight?
Carly please come dance with me on your porch.

You can move in the most beautiful ways,
And I'll be following stride, yes, my feet clumsy on the floor,
But right now dear, I'm only dancing with your door.

Come out Carly,
Come to dance and sing.
You'll run out of water soon,
I'm afraid you have no more tears to store.
So come out Carly,
I'm here banging your damn door.

Come out Carly,
Come to dance and sing.

R. Crowe

Trauma · 10-17-2007, 08:00 PM

This is good.

Crowe · 10-21-2007, 11:56 PM

anyone?

Kevorkian Logic · 10-22-2007, 05:43 PM

the last line is a bit trite, but otherwise there's some good stuff in there. "Ignite the smile" is sticking out.

cardboard adolescent · 10-22-2007, 06:04 PM

Wait, you're Russell Crowe?

Crowe · 10-23-2007, 10:42 AM

haha Ryan. But you know how we do.

The Dave · 10-23-2007, 11:24 AM

I liked it, it wasn't anything too complicated but it had a very simplistic beauty about it. I kinda agree with what KL said about the last line, but overall it's a good piece.

10-15-2007, 03:41 PM	#361 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	yeah, upload it somewhere for me~ thanks bro __________________

10-16-2007, 12:42 PM	#364 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	My Relationship With Carly's Door I'm getting those juices back... My Relationship With Carly's Door Carly what's got you stuck inside? Are you really crying on the rug? Because I'm outside on your porch singing. If you wanted to smile for a minute or two, I'm outside on your porch singing. What's got your cheeks wet, tonight? Carly please come to reason, I'm on your porch. I could say the most beautiful things, Ignite the smile on you forever more, But right now honey, I'm only singing to your door. Carly what's got you sobbing inside? Are the tissues piling up? Because I'm outside on your porch singing. If you wanted to laugh for a minute or two, I'm outside on your porch singing. What's got you choking back words tonight? Carly please come dance with me on your porch. You can move in the most beautiful ways, And I'll be following stride, yes, my feet clumsy on the floor, But right now dear, I'm only dancing with your door. Come out Carly, Come to dance and sing. You'll run out of water soon, I'm afraid you have no more tears to store. So come out Carly, I'm here banging your damn door. Come out Carly, Come to dance and sing. R. Crowe __________________ Last edited by Crowe; 10-26-2007 at 10:54 AM.

10-17-2007, 08:00 PM	#365 (permalink)
Trauma snickers Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: detroit Posts: 2,194	This is good. __________________ A mi no me importa nada Para mi la vida es un sueño

10-21-2007, 11:56 PM	#366 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	anyone? __________________

10-22-2007, 05:43 PM	#367 (permalink)
Kevorkian Logic Imperfectly Perfect Join Date: Jan 2007 Location: North Carolina Posts: 1,290	the last line is a bit trite, but otherwise there's some good stuff in there. "Ignite the smile" is sticking out. __________________ "it is only through a limitless accumulation of the imperfect that a certain type of perfection can be attained"

10-15-2007, 10:26 PM	#362 (permalink)
Warren Groupie Join Date: Oct 2007 Location: with my mom Posts: 11	cute. I wish I could hear it how you hear it, though. produce it.

10-15-2007, 10:57 PM	#363 (permalink)
ProggyMan Reformed Jackass Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 3,964	I'd love to hear Frank Zappa do this.

10-22-2007, 06:04 PM	#368 (permalink)
cardboard adolescent ;) Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: CA Posts: 3,503	Wait, you're Russell Crowe?

10-23-2007, 10:42 AM	#369 (permalink)
Crowe Music Addict Join Date: Dec 2005 Posts: 699	haha Ryan. But you know how we do. __________________

10-23-2007, 11:24 AM	#370 (permalink)
The Dave Me and The Major Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Kentucky Posts: 1,830	I liked it, it wasn't anything too complicated but it had a very simplistic beauty about it. I kinda agree with what KL said about the last line, but overall it's a good piece.