post your other poems...if you wanna, we'll help ya

hmm.. go to my site..
www.piczo.com/junemaher

i only have a few poems on the site.. and a few songs.. i dunno what ones to post here haha..

i like
some parts confused me a lil', but i still like it.

Yes that one is good. Cliche, but good.

non of my stuff really makes alot of sense to anyone.. nor to me after a while but when i first write it.. it makes alot of sense. hahaha..
but out of al the stuff i wrote this doesn't make sense to you haha.. do tell???

Suicide


Its you
Its you isn't it
Its you thats doing this to me

Its you thats putting the pills in my mouth
Its you thats putting the gun to my head

STOP IT!
I don't want to die
Not yet

Then I look around me
No one is to be found

Its me
Its me isn't
Its me thats doing this

I can't stop
It won't stop

It hurts to much to let go




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now thats a old poem i wrote.. think that could ever be a ****ed up song hahahahha..

Once again, the poem is cliche but I find myself liking it.

Is there realy such a thing as too angsty when that's the effect you're going for anyway??

I've read a lot more angsty songs, check out some Johnny Cash ;)