the link ya gave me...ring a bell?

oh ya!!!! :o)

sorry

but ya i;m going back to being 32 now haha :o)

this conversation is weird, haha.

written anything else, Sabrina?

yea a few things i'll going to look in my "song writting book" and i'll see if i find something worth being picked apart to put in here ;p

ok cool, i look forward to it. ;)

hahah here we go!!!



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soon you won't be able to breath
i'll sufforcate you with all my needs
holding on to you like a heart disease
fighting my eevry emotional need

can't bretah
falling on my knees
hold me!
holde me please!!

you can't see the things in me
the things you can't open your eyes to see
something you won't believe
please!
open your eyes to me

damaged heart lay down for rest
try to taste this happiness
breaking lines to enter your heart
falling apart, holdin on.. i'll past the test

can't breath
falling on my knees
hold me!
hold me please!!

damaged heart won't you stay
hold on to me
hold me closem don't break away


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thoughts!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This one is actually very good...

really.. thank you!!! got a favorite part??

the can't breathe, fallin on my knees part ;)

so theres nothing you think shoudl be added taken away??? nothing??/