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Old 02-08-2006, 07:36 PM   #1 (permalink)
you are freakin out, man
 
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Glass Slippers

Redundance aside,
You have nothing to hide
So Align the reliant
deny me this pulse,
with static and silence
Give form to these dreams
Stifle your sorrow ‘til
Theres no more it can be

Now you call after
Stagg’ring in half time
As the starlight shines
truer than midnight chimes
It seems wrong to these virgin ears
the heavens cry much more than tears

Escape bleeding from your tomb
wishes left among bones
Shattered slippers forgotten
Realize youre alone

Look upon your legacy
Stolen from sleep,
now with angels to blame
you are just a disease

A single shot screams applause
the entire world screams disgrace
and now , with glass in your soul
this was just a mistake

this was just a mistake
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yeah i know its pretty much crap... crits?
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Old 02-08-2006, 07:40 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Well its is better then alone of stuff in here, not as good as one of the ones I read by you but still decent enough. It flows excellently by the way. Oh, and that was your 69th post lolz!
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