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Old 03-12-2006, 05:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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This is a lyric that I posted up a few months ago (the link's gone now to the old one). This time I've got access to the music, at

www.myspace.com/jodileeparker

The lyrics are very slightly different and the tune is very slightly different to what I now sing (the melody went a bit higher in the recording, but its just too much for me to reach!) - generally its the same though. If you have any criticisms or suggestions then please unleash them.

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Backseat Retribution - lyrics


Bring her now, to edify me

Bring her now, to edify me

Bring her now, to edify me

Bring her now, to edify me



These four walls

Are useless to me now

Without her breath upon the window

Her sweat across my brow



She is my motivation through the dreary ebb of life

I fall to the wayside, she pulls me back each night

With convolutions of these human desires

We find our retribution in the back seat of my car



As daylight fades my senses pine

I need to feel, her skin on mine

I need her now, to edify me

I need her now, to edify me



This society's too abstract

For me to understand

I demand an education

Through the light touch of your hand



You are my motivation through the dreary ebb of life

I fall to the wayside, you pull me back each night

With convolutions of these human desires

We find our retribution in the back seat of my car



So pull the handbrake and lock the doors

I need to feel my skin on yours

I need you now, to edify me

I need you now, to edify me

I need you now, to edify me

To edify me
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When Pete plays it is 100% live , your music if that's what you call it doesn't sound so good either? so you can't really critercize can you ?
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Old 03-12-2006, 06:13 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Awwww man these lyrics are so out of personal experience.
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Old 03-14-2006, 05:13 AM   #3 (permalink)
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I prefer Obsolete Alibi to be honest, although they are both brillo. Well done mate. Is that you singing? Unique voice.
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Old 03-15-2006, 06:49 PM   #4 (permalink)
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Hmmm...how to explain this. Its simple, yet has a unique exotic vibe to it. i like it, i remember these lyrics.
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Old 03-17-2006, 08:23 AM   #5 (permalink)
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Song about dogging?
You`re from Birmingham?

You ARE Stan Collymore & I claim my 5 pounds.
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Old 03-17-2006, 11:08 AM   #6 (permalink)
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How did you guess? Damn these paparazzi following me everywhere.

Apparently in the new Basic Instinct movie he has sex in a car. That's method acting for you.
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Old 03-17-2006, 02:22 PM   #7 (permalink)
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Yes, but he gets killed. Something that didn't happen, but should've. Died the way he lived-being a useless, perverted twat. I ****ing hate Stan Collymore.
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