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Old 03-18-2006, 10:27 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Be without you(parody)

Be without you( Parody)
I glad i'm not with you, can't be with you, dont want to be with you
(Oh, oh, oh, oh)
I glad i'm not with you, can't be with you, dont want to be with you
(Oh, oh, oh, oh)
Oooo (oh, oh, oh, oh) oooo

Chemistry was lame from the get-go
I really didnt know why
We didn't build nothing overnight
Cuz we knew it took some time
I guess it was just a phase
We couldnt see that
from top to bottom
Still i cant see that (yes)
It's very true that (yes)
We're through(yes)
We had real sh** (yes)
And dammit, we were…

Too strong for a while (but I can be without you baby)
And I'll be busy when you call me (cuz I can be without you baby)
Anybody who's never played, ya know just what I feel
Too hard to fake it, something can replace it
Call the radio if you just can be without your baby

I got a question for ya
See I already know the answer
But still I wanna ask you
Would you lie? (yes)
Attempt to make me cry? (yes)
Do somethin' behind my back and then try to cover it up?
Well, i didnt, ****er
My love was only your love (yes)
l was faithful (yes)
I was real (yes)
And with us you always knew the deal
We were...

Too strong for a while (but I can be without you baby)
And I'll be busy when you call me (cuz I can be without you baby)
Anybody who's never played, ya know just what I feel
Too hard to fake it, something can replace it
Call the radio if you just can be without your baby

See this is real talk
I'm leaving today (no matter what)
It was good (it was thin)
It was wrong (im leaving today)
But if you're down on love or don't believe
It ain't for you (no, it ain't for you)
And if you got it deep in your heart
And deep down you know that it's true (come on, come on, come on)
Well, let me see you put your hands up (hands up)
Fellas show your lady she's the one (fellas show your lady she's the one, oh)
Put your hands up (hands up)
Ladies let him know he's got your love
But if not, tell him staight up
We were...

Too strong for a while (but I can be without you baby)
And I'll be busy when you call me (cuz I can be without you baby)
Anybody who's never played, ya know just what I feel
Too hard to fake it, something can replace it
Call the radio if you just can be without your baby

Heeeeeeeeeeeey Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh
Heeeeeeeeeeeey Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh

I glad i'm not with you, can't be with you, dont want to be with you
I glad i'm not with you, can't be with you, dont want to be with you
I glad i'm not with you, can't be with you, dont want to be with you
I glad i'm not with you, can't be with you, dont want to be with you
I glad i'm not with you, can't be with you, dont want to be with you




edit: this is not a parody, this is just a remake of it, in some sorts
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Old 03-20-2006, 12:03 AM   #2 (permalink)
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thats a good ****in song man! Id like to hear it.
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Old 03-25-2006, 10:39 PM   #3 (permalink)
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thank you! but now, take a look at this....





Okay, to get this, you are going to need to know some things. Three sets of people are in this rmx. Its me(MCae, Da Brat, and the background singers. Now you need to know colors. My color is green, Da Brat’s color is red, and the Bground singers’ color is pink.
Now, at certain parts, two sets are singing different stuff at the same time, when this happens, the two separate colors are both bolded and bigger in size.
But at other parts, a set is mainly singing and a different set sings quickly right after, just for a second or two. When this happens, you will see the set’s color in parentheses, not bolded or made bigger, just normal size and the sets color.
Do you get it?
It'll look weird, but...yea...

…Now that, that’s explained, well I hope so, I can also tell you that the italicized(sp.?) words are just saying who is singing mainly at the time.

Now to the rmx



Be without you rmx(Parody)
Da brat:
Ha!

MCae:
Glad im not wit you, glad im not wit you(Ha)

Da brat:
Da Brat and MCae
And you are now listenin’ to da
Rmx rmx(glad im not wit you, glad im not wit you)
Da Brat and MCae
And you are now listenin’ to da
Rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx(yea…you already kno)
You are listenin’ to da
Rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx
Da Brat
Another beat (Concentrate)

MCae:
Chemistry was lame from the get-go
I didnt know why
We didn't build nothing overnight
Cuz we knew it took some time
I guess it was just a phase
We couldnt see that
from top to bottom
Still I cant see that (yes)
It's very true that (yes)
We're through(yes)
We had real sh*t (yes)
And dammit, we were…

Too strong for a while (but I can be without you baby)
And I'll be busy when you call me (cuz I can be without you baby)
Anybody who's never played, ya know just what I feel
Too hard to fake it (something can replace it)
Call the radio if you just can be without your baby

I got a question for ya
See I already know the answer
But still I wanna ask you
Would you lie? (yes)
Attempt to make me cry? (yes)
Do somethin' behind my back and then try to cover it up?
Well, I didnt, f*cker
My love was only your love (yes)
l was faithful (yes)
I was real (yes)
And with us you always knew the deal
We were...

Too strong for a while (but I can be without you baby)
And I'll be busy when you call me (cuz I can be without you baby)
Anybody who's never played, ya know just what I feel
Too hard to fake it (something can replace it)
Call the radio if you just can be without your baby, yeahh

See this is real talk
I'm leaving today (go away….no matter what)
It was good (it was thin)( Da Brat)
It was wrong (im leaving today)(mary j)

Da brat:
Oh it’s classic baby

When we met
I knew you wasnt the one fo’ me
Even though when we wuz togetha
People be thinkin’ we destined to be special
Do you agree? (uhh)
Would you die for me? (uhh)
Try to lie to me? (yes)
Stay by my side thru simple & thin, or certain rivalries? (yes)
I figured you would
So I im leavin’ you jack(jack)
Anythin’ or everythin’ you need
Someone else could provide that
Take it from the past
I wouldnt take that(that)
I could be without chu in my life(look him right in his eyes)
I don’t need you where im at(and tell him)
Now MCae sing that(we’ve been)


MCae:
To strong for awhile (and I can be without you baby) (can be without you baby)
I'll be busy when you call me (cuz I can be without you baby)(ohh)
Anybody who's never played, ya know just what I feel
Too hard to fake it, something can replace it
Call the radio if you just can be without your baby(once again, once again)

Heeeeeeeeeeeey (you are listenin’ to the rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx)
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh (you are listenin’ to the rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx)
Heeeeeeeeeeeey (I told you, this is the rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx)
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhh (once again, this is the rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx, rmx)


Da brat:
Ha, ha, ha
Da Brat (Da Brat)
MCae (MCae)
Blah (blah)
What it do baby (what it do)
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Old 03-26-2006, 02:37 AM   #4 (permalink)
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what is this crazy rmx ****? i dont get you ****ing rnb types
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Old 03-26-2006, 04:16 AM   #5 (permalink)
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what is this crazy rmx ****?
Hmmm...i could of sworn i put the title, in bold even...its "Be without you rmx(Parody)".

Quote:
i dont get you ****ing rnb types
Mm'kay. just like some of us "rnb types" dont get you "rock/punk/emo/country/etc types".

But are you saying you cant get what im saying in the song? or what?
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Old 03-26-2006, 06:30 AM   #6 (permalink)
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the langauge used in this music. it just makes me angry and i dont understand how anyone can stand to listen to it. maybe im ignorant. maybe i just like clever things. maybe im an *******.
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Old 03-26-2006, 06:41 AM   #7 (permalink)
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what..slang? Why get angry over such a thing? please, you have that much time on your hands. I know what you mean when you say "i dont understand how anyone can stand to listen to it"", but not with rap/hip-hop/r&b/etc., with rock/classic/opera. Yes you maybe ignorant to this type of music, i dont know you like that, to tell or not. now the "maybe i just like clever things" thing was just stupid to say & unnecessary...plz man, save it. "maybe im an *******"...probably
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Old 03-27-2006, 02:19 AM   #8 (permalink)
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if you saw me walking down the street would you hook up with me?
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Old 03-27-2006, 02:33 AM   #9 (permalink)
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if you saw me walking down the street would you hook up with me?
You do say some very bizarre things.

Crazy Luv, I like these lyrics. They are nice and simple and get the message across clearly. I can also imagine how they would work in practise - in a song, which usually is difficult to do for lyrics that people post on the net.

There aren't many interesting individual lines, perhaps 3 in the whole thing (the ones which go "stay with me through simple and thin, through certain rivalries", "call the radio if you just can't be without your baby" and "we didn't build nothing overnight") but that doesn't really matter, because its more important, in my opinion, to get the message and feeling across than its is to clog up a lyric with lot of pretentious phrases.

Good work. Oh, I don't understand how its a parody. At all. Never mind.

You don't like Opera? What's wrong with you!?
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Old 03-27-2006, 03:05 AM   #10 (permalink)
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yeah, not too crazy about this song. The lyrics are really crass, no subtlety to them whatsoever. Bluntness can be a good thing in some cases, but I guess it's just a personal thing, because I tend not to like lyrics that are as "rough around the edges" as these are.

and like don't run me over said, how is it a parody? what is it mimicking and how has it altered the message or meaning from the original?
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