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Cemetary Drive · 03-22-2006, 01:28 PM

yes thats true, but its still a good excercise. If all your songs didn't rhyme at all or at least a little bit, it would sorta be wierd, well, for me anyways. Yea its true that if you just "string a bunch of lyrics together with a bunch of words that are only there because they rhyme", it wouldn't make sense and therefore the song would have no meaning, but that doesn't mean that you can't do this every once in a while to keep your rhyming skills up, and the songs not that bad. There are also some songs that rhyme perfectly and make no sense whatsoever.

Ma Cherie · 03-22-2006, 03:08 PM

plus i was editing sqeeky's song, i didn't write this, i just tried to make it sound better.

A_Perfect_Sonnet · 03-22-2006, 06:01 PM

Mission failed.

Ma Cherie · 03-23-2006, 09:40 AM

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Originally Posted by A_Perfect_Sonnet

Mission failed.

not compared to what it was, never said make it sound good, just make sound like something, it had no rhyme at all.....

03-22-2006, 01:28 PM	#11 (permalink)
Cemetary Drive Music Addict Join Date: Mar 2006 Posts: 48	yes thats true, but its still a good excercise. If all your songs didn't rhyme at all or at least a little bit, it would sorta be wierd, well, for me anyways. Yea its true that if you just "string a bunch of lyrics together with a bunch of words that are only there because they rhyme", it wouldn't make sense and therefore the song would have no meaning, but that doesn't mean that you can't do this every once in a while to keep your rhyming skills up, and the songs not that bad. There are also some songs that rhyme perfectly and make no sense whatsoever. __________________ And we'll love again We'll laugh again We'll smile again And we'll dance again and its better off this way so much better off this way I can't clean the blood off the sheets in my bed

03-22-2006, 03:08 PM	#12 (permalink)
Ma Cherie The Forums Sadistic Ghost Join Date: Mar 2005 Location: beyond midnight, in the abyss of time, the syren in the night Posts: 457	plus i was editing sqeeky's song, i didn't write this, i just tried to make it sound better. __________________ I'm not a freak on a leash, I'm just the freak holding the leash. http://www.myspace.com/yukiko_mori

03-22-2006, 06:01 PM	#13 (permalink)
A_Perfect_Sonnet Dinosaurus Rex!!! Join Date: Nov 2005 Location: Winchester, VA Posts: 896	Mission failed.