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Old 03-20-2006, 03:25 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default Run around

Run around

run around
run around
falling down
hit the ground

don't stop!
don'twait!
gotta beat ya home now
see you on the other side

feel the wind
and touch the stars
gonna fly gotta soar

see them walking
hear them talking
none of this is for me
there just to much
for me to see

gonna run fast as the wind
gonna fly to feed my whim
see the world
taste the stars
soon as my feet touch the ground

i'm gonna
run,run run around!
run around
hit the ground
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Old 03-20-2006, 04:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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So you've ditched crappy goth poetry and moved on to just plain crappy poetry? Its generic, repetitive, lacks imagination and is extremely boring.
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Old 03-20-2006, 05:07 PM   #3 (permalink)
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yet its the kind of song on like a system of a down CD, where it makes no sense, but you can totally get into. Like "This cocaine makes me feel like I'm on song", the lyrics are friggin "Don't eat the fish!!!"!!!??!! lol, I think its good for one of the pointless get something out songs.
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Old 03-20-2006, 05:31 PM   #4 (permalink)
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this is like a buckwheat boys song. like peanut butter jelly time song. one just to get you crunk, but not making any sense(but dont need to either).
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Old 03-21-2006, 12:26 PM   #5 (permalink)
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it the hyper song, besides
i'm the walrus by the beatles made absolutely no sense....
"...sitting on a corn flake waitng for the bus to come..."
deffinately doesn't make sense
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Old 03-21-2006, 03:33 PM   #6 (permalink)
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once youre as respected, or even as good as the beatles you can make a song with lame lyrics. personally i would focus on writing good ones, before thinking of an excuse to keep bad ones
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True, I would make better songs at first too, but like its good to just have songs that make no sense, it helps you with your ability to rhyme and come up with actual meaningful lyrics.

I dunno, my thoughts...
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Well she could make up all the boiteux with a tyte beat, then it'll be all good.
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Old 03-21-2006, 10:31 PM   #9 (permalink)
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True, I would make better songs at first too, but like its good to just have songs that make no sense, it helps you with your ability to rhyme and come up with actual meaningful lyrics.

I dunno, my thoughts...
completely disagree. If you concentrate on rhyming you'll just string a bunch of lyrics together with a bunch of words that are only there because they rhyme. Some of the best lyrics i've heard dont rhyme at all.
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