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Old 04-26-2006, 11:57 AM   #1 (permalink)
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Alive

I've washed my conscience down the drain
But know I’ll never be the same
Dragged you through my house
A total stranger
Make you wish you hadn’t come
Never gonna make it home

Alive
Alive
Alive
Goodnight

You'll beg me to let you go but
I'm not that bright and not that slow
So shut up and stay quiet
I still haven't decided
What I will do
Make your worst nightmares come true

Alive
Alive
Alive
Goodnight
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Old 04-30-2006, 03:25 PM   #2 (permalink)
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Chorus is awful and so is the You'll beg me to let you go but I'm not that bright and not that slow line.
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Old 04-30-2006, 06:18 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Nothing flows for me, rewrite it with different syllable counts or trash it.
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Old 05-01-2006, 09:48 AM   #4 (permalink)
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Originally Posted by hobojesus
Chorus is awful and so is the You'll beg me to let you go but I'm not that bright and not that slow line.
Yeh I Agree ^
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Old 05-01-2006, 09:50 AM   #5 (permalink)
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i'll leave it the way it is! thanx for the comments
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Old 05-01-2006, 09:52 AM   #6 (permalink)
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Np Thats What Where Hear For Good Luck On Writing More In Future
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Old 05-01-2006, 09:55 AM   #7 (permalink)
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thanx smoggey, well swim and hobo don't get the point of the song/poem so i couldn't be bothered explaining it. if they were that good they would get the point and the style of the writing.
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Old 05-01-2006, 10:04 AM   #8 (permalink)
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Yeh Hmm Maybe Explain Next Time ?
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Old 05-01-2006, 10:07 AM   #9 (permalink)
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well i think that i shouldn't have to it's not that hard to see what it's about and the style of writing i'm going for!
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Old 05-01-2006, 10:09 AM   #10 (permalink)
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Yeh I Agree . But Some People See Things Differnt In Many Ways ? Like Look At Some Lyrics People Dont Get Them At All And Some People Do ! ! !
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