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Old 05-21-2006, 12:57 AM   #1 (permalink)
that's my war face.
 
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I went wild inside, please believe me
I might not act the type but I am not stone
she made the move first and I didn't know what to do
the only reason I'm backing down is cos I love you
please believe me, I would never harm y'

Can we not talk of this? It makes me feel awkward
I know it is all my fault and you should know I feel awful
It happened all so suddenly what was I meant to do?
It's not like I retaliated, I pulled away very soon
please believe me, I would never harm y'





Another new direction I'm going in. Only 2 verses so far, but tell me whether you like it or not so I can see whether this is a direction I could possibly take with my music.
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Old 05-21-2006, 05:57 AM   #2 (permalink)
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I like it Hobo. I think you should fit a Chorus in, it's a good song.
But the Chorus has to be right to be honest! 4/5 ****
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