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Old 05-22-2006, 04:56 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Default The Lost People

I was at this concert yesterday, and saw a bunch of BEAT looking people. Total drug addicts with nothing goin for em. I got inspired and wrote this..

The Lost People

Hello my friend
How have you been?
Who are you with?
And whats with him?

Your eyes look glazed
Are you O.K.?
I'm sorry to say
But your face looks grey

Look at your shoes
Ragged and used
Like an old man's tattoo
Faded and loose

Did you lose your way
in the desert plane?
Wondering in pain
The drugs bring rain

You awaken dry
completely fried
out of your lines
harder to find

The lost people
Dont have a clue
Tired and feeble
But they found you
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Old 05-24-2006, 04:26 PM   #2 (permalink)
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The bass line for this song can be found on page 1 here:
http://www.activebass.com/default.asp?src=l&l=20954&p=1
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Old 06-08-2006, 09:48 PM   #3 (permalink)
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Old 06-08-2006, 09:54 PM   #4 (permalink)
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thats pretty damn good
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