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Old 06-17-2006, 07:14 PM   #1 (permalink)
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Donít take yourself too seriously
[Youíre young and then you die]
Do what you want
While you can
And donít let anyone
Tell you different

Donít judge a magazine by the star on the front
Donít be fake--donít put on a front
(Never conform never brake)

Force peopleís eyes open
Be a bitch if itís really who you are
Someone will love you for it
(God knows I would.)

Donít be afraid
Never be.
The worst outcome is death
And there is no Hell.
Evil is a choice
Choose what you want
(It makes no difference to the rest of us in the long run)

Destiny is
Fate is
(just is)
Itís all gonna happen anyway.

Make yourself happy
Be selfish
Live for you
Be selfish
Donít think before you speak
Rely on first impressions
Love yourself if no one else will
(Be your own best friend, confide in yourself and embrace)

Live like you wonít be tomorrow
Love all you can
Make yourself happy
(please yourself above all others)

Never be sad, never get mad
Useless emotions are too much
If you donít use it you loose it
Smile before you become depressed.
Smile today, smile tomorrow
Love always.
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Old 06-17-2006, 07:50 PM   #2 (permalink)
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it doesnt really flow..ermm when i read it its like stall
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We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.
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Old 06-17-2006, 07:51 PM   #3 (permalink)
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what I'm thinking is..it would have a lot of odd pauses ennit...but that would make it...flow...yeah. thankoo.
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Old 06-17-2006, 07:55 PM   #4 (permalink)
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its seems kind of forced.....ermm
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We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.
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Old 06-17-2006, 07:57 PM   #5 (permalink)
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This reeks with cliche.
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Old 06-17-2006, 07:59 PM   #6 (permalink)
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to blatent it sucks massivley
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We went back there and they had come and hacked off every inoculated arm. There they were in a pile. A pile of little arms. And I remember... I... I... I cried. I wept like some grandmother. I wanted to tear my teeth out. I didn't know what I wanted to do. And I want to remember it. I never want to forget it. I never want to forget. And then I realized... like I was shot... like I was shot with a diamond... a diamond bullet right through my forehead. And I thought: My God... the genius of that.
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Old 06-17-2006, 08:00 PM   #7 (permalink)
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I don't want to in any way want this to have to be deciphered. I wanted it to be blunt, and if that means cliche` then that's alright.
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Old 06-17-2006, 08:14 PM   #8 (permalink)
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There has never been a good song written by an 11 year old, you aren't going to change that.
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Old 06-17-2006, 08:17 PM   #9 (permalink)
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Twelve, mister "I'm in highschool I can count!" *rolls eyes and laughs*
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Old 06-17-2006, 08:19 PM   #10 (permalink)
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What does that have to do with my ability to count?
I guess that explains why I have to sit through 180 days of AP Stat next year
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