use a frackin' thesaurus :thumb::bowdown: it helps you from from using words like gentle you can find words with the same meaning but sound better

Crowe I don't think there's a standar line for writing lyrics for a song...it just comes out of you ;-)

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hey guys...new to the forum. was wondering if some folks would mind checking out some songs at my bands myspace...we are called "The Dagyo" and we are from Wilmington, NC. thanks.

Advertising aint cool round here

Even if you are from North Carolina :nono:

wouldnt this be the wrong thread to post direct advertisements on anyhow...?

Avoid using words like People, Everyone, Everything, etc. in songs. They just make you sound pretentiously bland without any ability to create imagery.

i think it depends on how you use them tho. especially if you're giving a command in the song.

One of my friends bands has a song that is like (in one part):

People killing, people stealing
People lying, people crying
People shutting doors in your face
Oh, it’s become such a horrid place

sucks. Really bland.

ok yeah that just sucks.