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10-11-2006, 02:35 PM | #1 (permalink) |
that's my war face.
Join Date: Nov 2005
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Head like a sieve
Burdens fill the gaps
The sun shines through my body With my back to it I run from everybody Pieces of a boy The shadow of a man Caught between the two Lost without a plan Tears in the message centre The old mans been there since December And I know we'll make it in the end Effort consumes my soul Realisation is a bother Facing outward to the world Not looking at the problem I'll stare you in the eye And nothing will have changed My face forces a smile but broken I remain Tears in the message centre The old mans been there since December And I know we'll make it in the end I'll try my best and that's all I can give But it's hard when your heads like a sieve... It's hard when your heads like a sieve... You might not agree, but I'm going to be ****y and say this is my favourite piece of work I've done in a while. Please comment... |
10-11-2006, 03:04 PM | #4 (permalink) |
Atchin' Akai
Join Date: May 2005
Location: Unamerica
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Has it got a chorus?
If not I like the idea of this being it... Tears in the message centre The old mans been there since December And I know we'll make it in the end I'll try my best and that's all I can give But it's hard when your heads like a sieve... It's hard when your heads like a sieve... And having read it again several times, I have to say the first verse is brilliant. Also, I would have picked the line...Pieces Of A Boy, Shadow Of A Man, as the title, despite liking your pick. It's one of your better ones. |
10-11-2006, 03:12 PM | #5 (permalink) |
The Sexual Intellectual
Join Date: Dec 2004
Location: Somewhere cooler than you
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This thread reminds me of sievehead from Saturday Superstore
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