Does Anyone Know (show)

ZeppelinAir · 01-08-2007, 02:44 PM

bored and need something to do, resaults below

Does anyone Know

What came of the mystical angels wings,
The Magic surrounded every word spoken,
How come I couldn’t see what became of the hours from times ago,
And where are they now, thrown away behind your eyes,
From a useless mess of speech and anger that came from every breathe,

Does anyone know where the time all goes,
Does anyone know when the angels will show,
Does anyone know why they would all sink so low,
Does anyone know where this gale will blow,
Will anyone ever know where the love goes…

Stars that gleam and seem to show what lies ahead,
But I’m always afraid that I might end up dead,
Contradicting everything in my head,
Trying to forget every piercing word you said,
And healing all the wounds that bleed,

Does anyone know where the time all goes,
Does anyone know when the angels will show,
Does anyone know why they would all sink so low,
Does anyone know where this gale will blow,
Will anyone ever know where the love goes…

angel18 · 01-09-2007, 11:07 AM

It's good as it is. Although the constant rhymning kinda bored me a little. You could also add more length to it.

Angel

PaperHurricanesAndPlanes · 01-09-2007, 02:15 PM

Black dotzorz.

ZeppelinAir · 01-09-2007, 10:26 PM

i dont usauly rhyme in mine too much, and i thought it might need to be a little longer, i'll work on it

01-08-2007, 02:44 PM	#1 (permalink)
ZeppelinAir Long time no see Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 512	Does Anyone Know bored and need something to do, resaults below Does anyone Know What came of the mystical angels wings, The Magic surrounded every word spoken, How come I couldn’t see what became of the hours from times ago, And where are they now, thrown away behind your eyes, From a useless mess of speech and anger that came from every breathe, Does anyone know where the time all goes, Does anyone know when the angels will show, Does anyone know why they would all sink so low, Does anyone know where this gale will blow, Will anyone ever know where the love goes… Stars that gleam and seem to show what lies ahead, But I’m always afraid that I might end up dead, Contradicting everything in my head, Trying to forget every piercing word you said, And healing all the wounds that bleed, Does anyone know where the time all goes, Does anyone know when the angels will show, Does anyone know why they would all sink so low, Does anyone know where this gale will blow, Will anyone ever know where the love goes… __________________ not that old signature

01-09-2007, 10:26 PM	#4 (permalink)
ZeppelinAir Long time no see Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: somewhere in Michigan Posts: 512	i dont usauly rhyme in mine too much, and i thought it might need to be a little longer, i'll work on it __________________ not that old signature

01-09-2007, 11:07 AM	#2 (permalink)
angel18 Music Addict Join Date: Jul 2005 Posts: 129	It's good as it is. Although the constant rhymning kinda bored me a little. You could also add more length to it. Angel