Kevorkian Logic

****test? is that a word?

There's a difference between ****ed up, and ****ty. I personally enjoy ****ed up stuff, but can't tolerate ****ty.

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"it is only through a limitless accumulation of the imperfect that a certain type of perfection can be attained"

sleepy jack

Yes

http://dictionary.reference.com/browse/shittiest

Its censored so just copy and paste it into your browser.

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Kevorkian Logic

oh, i thought it was a different word.

*ucktest

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"it is only through a limitless accumulation of the imperfect that a certain type of perfection can be attained"

either/or

lol not fu ck , sh it

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Painstaking devotion and love
Surrendered to self preservation
From others who care for themselves
A blindness that touches perfection
But hurts just like anything else

Isolation, isolation, isolation

Ace

Most do, especially if there is no song to the lyrics.
Try taking a decent band, (which you know is good, yet haven't heard much of), and read the lyrics and tell me if you can actually say "this is great", before you hear the music.
Anyway....yeah dude, last two of yours I read is pretty bad.
Try approaching it differently.
I still don't see why all the poet boys seem intent on flaming you though,
when they post all poems and no lyrics....(exception being DRMO).
Scrap it.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by RezZ I think I know much better than you ever will how Mettalica is. I used to play for 2 years in a Mettalica cover band.

Dark Circle

I am sick of hearing cloned bands who made it but, since there are no more original things in this world, I had to chose the rarest of all. I want to make music for the mases because it is, unfortunately, the only way to make people hear my music

A_Perfect_Sonnet

To Ace: You don't have to sacrifice lyrical content just to write music. And it is very possible to write GOOD lyrics before the music.

Crowquill
Nothing's so lucid as the promise of dreams, but these pills we found just make me sleep. There's nothing quite so pure as the written word my dear, so lets have ourselves a little poem. Until the will to speak loses urgency. Our animal indecency in print is so blase. Its about the bell tower, at the golden hour. Angel of the spires climbs her steel cage staircase spine, angle of desire. Ascend the wrought iron, one by one, wrung by wrung. Is it the rising roofline that makes me feel so swallowed whole, or the way my body barely pricks the sky, the same as a century's worth of virgin's blood that's passed through my longing veins, scheming to convince my aching mind that pleasure's got nothing on the miracle of need. Nothing's so purile as meter and rhyme when you can't see the ground from that ledge and this perch is so far, far from the nest. Gravity doesn't grant me the privilege of failure. my bough never breaks, I don't stumble into anything. so I climb and I carve my initials in the bark with that feather I found, but its all so contrived. My genes didn't bless me with the foresight of a sage but I know how this will end, in apologies and ink on the page. A slowly constructed crowquilled confession of my spirit to all of you, black waterproof ink scars the board, so hot-pressed, pristine and pure. A slowly constructed manifestation of "to tremble", as base as a bridge in a song and less like the poem that I promised you. Nothing's so lurid as haiku-detat on sidewalks in white outlined chalk, all I've got are these ink smeared lines. With our voices in harmony, the offering, of a crowquilled threnody.

Dark Circle

Peopl who like this kind of lyrics will understand.

A_Perfect_Sonnet

You are an idiot. Here's what will happen:

1) Assuming ANY record company whatsoever want to sign you (big maybe), you will go into the studio where they will force you to write an album in a short amount of time. You have already said it takes you months to write music, so this is where your problems will begin.

2) As you write the album you will be hyped by the record company as the "next big thing", building up your image and sound before even releasing a song.

3) The first song you get mastered with ultimately become your single, and people will either let you drop off, or buy your album based on that one song. Ultimately they will probably be disappointed either way.

4) You and your petty dreams of making a bunch of money and banking on the fact that people are idiots who want to listen to the same generic music over again will fall through the cracks, and you'll be cast back into obscurity with stories to tell of "I used to be in ________." Nobody will care.

By all means continue living your fantasy, but you're not some prophetical lyricist/musician, you are just another cookie-cutter wannabe.

Dark Circle

For your information, I already have material for 4 albums because I do not make one song at a time. People who like this kind of music will not be disappointed and will buy our albums. There already are tons of people who like our music!