Alo

A guy I knew jumped off a building, I wrote this for him:

I cry for you bravery
Your sadness, your despair
For how you saw no other way
Because your life was so unfair

I imagine you standing at he edge
Clasping the rail tight
Then slowly loosening your grip
Stuck in a moral fight

Then letting go
The jump
The fall
The single thought
‘I’m done’

It’s over now, we’ll cry for you, rest in peace, you’re done.

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ZeppelinAir

you miss spelled the^^^

its pretty good, short and to the point wish there was more imagery though

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sleepy jack

I like the simpleness, but then again it also seems like it could be a good deal more. I can't explain it.

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Alo

Where? If you mean then, it wasn't misspelled, I meant then.

I wish it were more, I feel so much more around this all. I just can't seem to put it into words. It just hurts, that he hated himself and his life so much. He was a great guy.

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ZeppelinAir

right there, should have pointed it out better

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