Desperation Girl (Part 1 and 2)

Ace · 04-23-2007, 11:16 PM

I wrote most of this within two days, but spent another three brushing it up.
The pace for the first part is softer and slower, but it gets faster on the second.
Part 1 goes directly into part 2, so there is no gap in it whatsoever.
Alot of work was put into this, so comments will be appreciated.
If you read it, let me know how you like it.

Desperation Girl (Part 1 and 2)
04/20/07 - 04/24/07

-----Part 1-----

[-----Verse 1-----]

She's the girl that you leave when you go out
Don't want to be seen, showin' her around
What would they think if you - told them how much
You have used her?

She's the girl that you love when you have the time
When she's convienient to you, that's when you think she's fine
What would they think if you - told them how much
You've abused her?

She lifts you up - You keep her down
She asks for love
You put your hand over her mouth

She wants the truth - You look away
You lie to her
Just to keep a smile on her face

Soon enough she'll wake up from this dream
Just to find out that you have left again

And when she does, she'll finally come to see
That you don't care anymore, and you never did

You shake your head - She takes your hand
You pull it back
And tell her she'd never understand

[-----End Verse-----]

-----Part 2-----

[-----Verse 1-----]

You took away her better half
Then you tried your best, to make her feel bad
And now you're having fun - At her expense
You broke her heart

You said you'd never leave her
Then you used her love, to deceive her
How could you hurt someone - Who's always been
So innocent?

You made her dress to look "fit"
Though you've always stood, against it
You stole the grace from her - I hope you get
What you deserve

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

You only love her when you can't have,
Anyone else

She's only good enough,
When you tell her she is

She's the desperation girl

You only love her when you can't have,
Anyone else

(background)
She's the desperation girl

She's only good enough,
When you tell her she is

She's the desperation girl

And now she knows just what,
She needs to do

She's the desperation girl

This time, she tells you
That she's done with you

She's the desperation girl (x2)

[-----End Chorus-----]

[-----Verse 2-----]

You left her living in pain
You should have put her down, easily
Your better half is dead - It's black and dim
Just like the rest

I think it's time you moved on
And quit using her, for your fun
One day you'll pay for this - But what you buy
Will be regret

She doesn't need to dress up
She only needs, to feel loved
She's fine just like she is - So what you see
Is what you get

[-----End Verse-----]

[-----Chorus-----]

You only love her when you can't have,
Anyone else

She's only good enough,
When you tell her she is

She's the desperation girl

You only love her when you can't have,
Anyone else

(background)
She's the desperation girl

She's only good enough,
When you tell her she is

She's the desperation girl

And now she knows just what,
She needs to do

She's the desperation girl

This time, she tells you
That she's done with you

She's the desperation girl (x2)

[-----End Chorus-----]