I Sin, You Sin (lyrics, metal, punk, genre, quote)

evil_hand · 11-04-2007, 10:03 PM

lol.

i'm not seeing how a knowledge of metal is relevant to a punk song.

enemyat_thesix · 11-05-2007, 02:45 PM

well thanks for the input, negative and... negative ^_^

TheBig3 · 11-05-2007, 09:07 PM

religion = boring
fun = sin.

deep.

enemyat_thesix · 11-06-2007, 01:02 PM

lol, you missed the entire point of the song

ProggyMan · 11-06-2007, 02:59 PM

Which is?

enemyat_thesix · 11-06-2007, 06:54 PM

carpe diem bro

redINFLUE_TheFineRedLine · 11-07-2007, 05:37 AM

well, being a songwriter myself i have to give kudos on writing one in the first place even though it's not the best

ProggyMan · 11-07-2007, 06:45 PM

Quote:

Originally Posted by enemyat_thesix

carpe diem bro

I have a shirt that says that, lol. The words just ooze teenage angst. Seems like you're saying **** authority, I'm gonna' go get laid!

The Dave · 11-07-2007, 07:02 PM

So I love how everyone is giving you feedback but rather than taking the advice to heart you're just acting like an arrogant prick about the whole thing. My advice: Trash the piece and learn how to take some constructive criticism.

Everything you touch isn't golden.

sleepy jack · 11-07-2007, 07:08 PM

I don't really see much constructive criticism in here. What I see is someone gave a helpful opinion, which was negative and then everyone jumped on the hate train and started throwing out the common "this song is bad" terms like "cliche" and then bam, it's two pages of useless posts.

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evil_hand Groupie Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: Australia Posts: 5	lol. i'm not seeing how a knowledge of metal is relevant to a punk song. __________________ DISREGARD THAT, I SUCK WANGS

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TheBig3 killedmyraindog Join Date: Aug 2004 Location: Boston, Massachusetts Posts: 11,172	religion = boring fun = sin. deep. __________________ I've moved to a new address

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ProggyMan Reformed Jackass Join Date: Sep 2007 Posts: 3,964	Which is?

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redINFLUE_TheFineRedLine Groupie Join Date: Nov 2007 Location: the bible belt = ( Posts: 8	well, being a songwriter myself i have to give kudos on writing one in the first place even though it's not the best

11-07-2007, 07:02 PM	#19 (permalink)
The Dave Me and The Major Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: Kentucky Posts: 1,830	So I love how everyone is giving you feedback but rather than taking the advice to heart you're just acting like an arrogant prick about the whole thing. My advice: Trash the piece and learn how to take some constructive criticism. Everything you touch isn't golden.